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Hi everyone! I actually made another poem and I have to say this is better than the other one I made of Kodomo No Omocha, but this is more depressing. There is an ending spoiler of the Samurai X OVAs. If you haven’t see Seishoshen (was that how you spell it?) a.k.a Samurai X: Reflection, than I advised you not to read it. This is in Kaoru’s POV.
~ Son Lin
Warning: Get your tissues!
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The Wind’s Final Song
The petals will fly.
The wind singing its withered song.
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Your head lie lightly in my lap.
As I caress your gentle cheek.
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The future ahead
The sorrow we see
The lives that will be
The friends that will grow
And the hope of our dear son
*
And still the petals fly
The wind singing its melody
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The heart that you have
The desire I seek
And your past that was determined to be atoned
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The world that is now
The sorrow you have
And the pain that you burdened alone
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And still the petals fly
The wind singing our melody
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The manslayer within you
The wanderer you were
The person you are right now
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The death you are near
The love that I carry
The silence response that I receive
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And still the petals fly
The wind singing its mournful song
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The face that I stared
The eternal slumber you're in
And your scar of your past is gone.
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The tears that I weep
The sting in my heart
The smile on my face is gone
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The wanderer is at his last
The journey for you has ended
But you'll always be my one
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And now the petals do its final whirl.
The wind singing its final song.
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I’m not exactly a poet but this movie defiantly got me to writing one. And it got me thinking and frickin depressed. ;-; ::sniff:: Please tell me your opinion on the poem whether you like or hated it or anything that could have been better. Thanks! ::sniff:: I’m out! ::sniff::
~ Son Lin