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Yu-Gi-Oh make sense?! The Muse is the main one in control of this fic! Yup. So that usually means that chapters should come out sooner than they would if lazyness was in control. Of course, Lazyness might lock the Muse in a locker or something to get control. I uh-- Quit poking me!!
Muse: is poking black kitten Less talking more typing!
Lawyers: Our client does not own Yu-Gi-Oh...do not sue her... This fic will contain violence, possible swearing, and lots of flashbacks...Parents strongly cautioned...
Before I forget, in this fic, Yami has his own body. I've seen so many fics like that so I don't think I need to explain how he got his own body. Let's just pretend that him and his friends cast a spell that got him his own body.
Chapter 1
Yugi and his friends were walking home from school. It was friday, so now they had the whole weekend to themselves. They all laughed and talked about how their day went. Right now they were heading to Yugi's house.
Yugi kept looking around. Lately he felt as if he were being watched. Just the other day, he saw this red car following him.
(a.n. I already hate this fic...hopfully it will get better.)
He turned his attention back to his friends when he was suddenly pulled into an ally. He tried to cry out, but a hands covered his mouth. Lucky for him, his friends immediatly noticed his absence and turned around to see were he went. The stranger pulled him further into the ally, probably hoping to not be seen.
" Yugi? Where'd ya go?" Joey's voice asked.
' Something's not right.' Yami thought to himself as he felt the panic through their mind link.
As Yugi was dragged further away from his friends, he kicked over a trash can. The noise alerted his friends and they ran into the ally.
" Yugi! Let him go!" Yami ordered.
Yami looked at the stranger, but he couldn't make out what the person looked like. The man was wearing a ski mask. The only thing Yami could see was a crazed grin. Yami ran toward the man, but stopped shortly. The guy had taken a gun out of his coat pocket, and aimed it straight at Yugi's head.
" Get on the ground now!" The man ordered in a deep voice." Or your friend here won't live to see another day."
Everyone slowly dropped to the ground. They all felt so powerless. Why does this kind of stuff always happen to them?
(a.n. cackles evilly)
The man smiled and them smacked Yugi over the head with the gun, causing him to lose conciousness. Yami growled at the man.
" Well I'd love to stay and chat." the man said and ripped the millenium puzzle off Yugi's neck. He tossed it to the ground. It luckily didn't break." But I have to go now."
He walked off down the allyway with Yugi in one arm, and the gun in the other arm.
End chapter one. I hated this chapter, but it should get better. This chapter is only showing how the whole ordeal started. That's all. Tell me what you think. Constuctive criticism might help this story. I'm better at writing Invader Zim fics than any other fics.
Shadow dark: So tell us what you think...