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Author: VizeerLord
Fiction Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Romance - Nabiki & Kasumi - Reviews: 329 - Published: 10-19-03 - Updated: 05-17-08 - id:1566258

Sister 26

ISDH

AR:

I keep getting advice to separate this into two different stories. I can not do that. Besides being a repeat-time line, a non-R/A direct match up, it is a what IF, this is a comparison of what would happen if Nabiki took control as to what if Kasumi took control. And not just of Ranma, but also their lives and then tried to influence the world around them.

Nabiki in her side of the story, has moved on Ranma as both big sister and love interest. She has been trying to make him more open to touching and holding. I may have moved a little fast, and so Ranma might have a reaction, later. I also brought in Nokoda early. Mix in Shampoo and P-chan, and things are going to be different.

Kasumi in her side, has told Ranma that he needs to learn a few skills to be civilized. Also She has moved on Tofu. He is hers, as She is his. She has no interest in Ranma. Within the last few Chapters both Nabiki and Akane are planning on corralling the "wild horse." I have also brought up a twist. (or is it 2?)

In both, Akane is not the same as she in Cannon. In Both she will get slapped by Ranma if she attacks him for no reason. She will not 'lose' her mallet attack, but will learn not to use it on Ranma. She will also gain skill in the Art. She might even match Shampoo and Ukyo in the Art.

Thank you for your comments, suggestions, and advice.

Nabiki

05/12/1992 , Tuesday

She awoke warm, comfy, and dry. She was trapped in the arms of her bed partner. Turning her head she sees her 'Lover'. She smiles, and reaches up to kiss the mousy brown haired girl on the lips.

"Mmmm"

The arms tightened about her, pulling her closer into the slight yet full bust of Nabiki.

"Morning Nabiki. Time to get up."

"not now Kasumi...still need sleep..."

"Not Kasumi, besides We need to get up so we can start your retraining."

"don't wanna"

"Look at it this way. This way, you can brag about the workout you are getting for free.

"Free?" Everyone has some triggers set in their minds. As we all know Ranma's number one is food, or rather 'Breakfast'. Nabiki's are 'Free', 'Payment', and 'I bet'.

--

Ten minutes later Ranma and Nabiki are wearing shorts and stretching (or rather Nabiki is stretching, Ranma-chan is fidgeting with her sports bra.)

To begin Ranma asked Nabiki to run a kata for 'him'. When she would make a mistake, he would stop her, correct her form, and have her begin anew. After about the eighth restart Akane showed up. She saw what was going on and joined Nabiki in the Kata. Ranma started stopping the kata and correcting Akane, and Akane responded in S.O.P., a.k.a. mallet-sama smashing pervert...

...and was slammed into the floor mallet still in hand- in mid-down swing. "If you can not take my instruction, you can leave your title as heir to Tendo School of Anything Goes. Nabiki is more then willing to take your place." Ranma was not going to allow this mallet-happy-tomboy off the just be cause she could throw a punch and kick combo. "if you allow me to correct your form, you have a chance to match me in skill level. I will consider that your family style is more of a grounded style, so I will not ask that you learn the mid-air style of the Satome school. Can you take my corrections?"

--

After Breakfast, Ranma walked along the fence with Nabiki walking just ahead of him. She was new to the fence, but had the basics of balance down. In the time it took them to get to Tofu's She had only lost her balance twice, and once was to see how Ranma would catch her.

They entered the front office, and sat quietly holding hands. Ranma was looking over the books placed about the room. Most were on nonmodern healing. There were some on 'magical' arts of the Healers of old.

"Ah Ranma. This way please."

--

That Pervert!

How dare he/she say that he could strip her of her title! She would just have to show him! All she would need is Someone to show her How to Pound that Pervert!!

"Where the Hell Am I Now?!"

She turned to look at the outlander with a backpack and umbrella. "Nimera, just a few blocks from Furirken High School. Why do you ask?"

The Outlander looked at her. "Am looking for either Satome Ranma, or Tendo Nabiki. I Have Come to beat his face into the ground for the insults he has committed against me. I was staying with his mother until the Challenge, but got lost going down to the Breakfast table this morning."

"I am Tendo Akane, Nabiki is my sister. If you can stay up with me, you are welcome to hang out until I go home. Be warned, you might have to pound Kuno for hanging with me." At his fanged grin, ' He is so cute, I wonder if he can show me how to pound that pervert..."

As they entered the school yard, A small group of boys charged. it was a few of the diehard bakas. Ryoga stepped forward and, with his umbrella, swept them away. only to catch the incoming rose. Handing the rose to Akane, "I think this is for you."

Seeing yet another guy with his Tigeress, Kuno did not even bother issuing his challenge. he just attacked...only to have his 'sword' block, batted aside, and punched in the chest with the point of his foe's weapon. When the Bell rang, all one could see on the front area of the school was Kuno wrapped around a tree, and someone had used a black marker to tag the Kendo "master's" forehead; BAKA!!



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