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Max Evelyn
Author of 9 Stories

Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 02-25-04 - Published: 02-18-04 - Complete - id:1738602
It had been 3 weeks since the kidnapping of the twin Knights parents and Max.

Bill sat in the chair typing at the laptop that was in front of him, he looked up at the door to see the teams return from a other day of searching, Scotty and Ash it him looked like they had given up all hope, suddenly the laptop started to bleeping, Bill shot up from his set and shouted "the Metallic's I've found them" all the others gave a odd-looking to him.

"Bill, you've say that before-" Mighty said but was cut short by Vector.

"He's right we have found them" Vector looked at the laptop, "the signals coming from, huh, now wait a minute".

"What is it, V" Elk said, looked at him.

He looked up in horror "signals coming from above the city".

Ash looked up out one of the windows of his home, "above" he whispered, suddenly he felt an overpowering feeling enter his mind, it's wasn't Max it was another powerful psychic.

{I will help you, Ash} the voice said.

Ash looked at the others but they were looking at the laptop, Ash closed his eyes and concentrated on the voice, second later he open his eye as he felt a breeze, he found him self hovering 5 miles above the city, "what on earth" he yelled in a panic.

"Do not fear, my friend," replied a voice.

Ash turned to the voice it was a chameleon/hedgehog highbred, dark purple fur with red and black lines down his spikes and body, he also had a patch of white fur on his chest, he wore a short red leather jacket his shoes yellow, red and black with a grey strip across, and Ash asked him "who are you".

"Oh, my names Vortex, I think we should go help your parents and Max" replied the highbred, " ".

"Ok Vortex" Ash called back.

Vortex flew him self and Ash towards a gigantic black metal island, it was 19 miles above the city and was hidden in the clouds, "your parents and Max are inside" Ash nodded.

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In the heart of the black island, in a row of cells were the parents of Scotty and Ash, the two are sat together in the same cell, in the cell next to them is the badly injured Max, who had been tortured right in front of the a number of time.

The metal foxes tortured Max to the point of death the left him to heal and then started it all over again, the powerful psychic was lying with his back up against the cell cold metal wall.

Summer looks over at now bad all of Max's wounds are, she then starts yells out "...Help us... Somebody... Somebody help us...Help... Help.... Help us!!... Anyone".

Max who is still unable to say a thing, because of the duct tape around his mouth, he just moans in pain, the device on the back of his head is stopping him from calling anyone with his abilities.

Samuel looks over at him "Max, my boy, how are you holding up", Max rolled over slowly and looks at him with eyes full of pain and rage, Samuel moved closer to the bars that held him he then said "if only I could take the thing of you, my boy".

"Maybe you can now, dad" a voice calls from the shadow.

Samuel and Summer turned to see Ash and this new figure walking calmly up to the cells, just then the doors to the two cells suddenly ware ripped from the walls by Vortex.

Who then walked into to Max's cell and he took the device off the back of his head, "ok, Max your go to be ok, now", he took out the piece of cloth that was once in his mouth.

Ash ran to his parents "mom and dad" he hugged them.

"Oh son" Samuel said

"Where, is Scott" Summer asked hopeful to see him.

Vortex walked out of the cell with Max who was using him for support, "sorry, I didn't have time to get all the team".

Max was in a very bad way; he weakly said, "Thanks".

"No problem" Vortex replied.

"Your problems have just started, freaks,” said a voice from behind them; the others turned around to see an old grey fox with him were the 9 same robots as from before.

"That’s the guy that did this to me" Max spat with hate.

Vortex gave Max to Ash and Samuel "get to the shuttle bay, I'll catch up with you soon".

The nanites in Max body were returning his strength fast, he let go of Ash and Samuel and he stood with no support, "No way, I have a serious score to settle with this guy".

"But Max" Ash said, but he watch as the two powerful psychic's walked forwards to the robot’s.

Max looked over at Vortex who looked at him there was something strange about the two of them, both felt a powerful link to each other but couldn’t place it, "ready!!" Max asked.

"Always" Vortex replied with a slight smirk, the two moved to get ready to fight.

"Wait, are you two going to just fight here" Samuel asked, all he got was a nod from Max.

"Ash, get your parents out of here, NOW" Vortex yelled at them to run.

Ash took one last look back at Max and his new friend "come on lets go" the three hedgehogs ran down one of the corridor.

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Both Max and Vortex made eye contact with the foxes, one of the them tried to do the same as before, it vanished and reappeared in front of Max, who was waiting for it, Max smiled at the stupid robot.

"Not this time, bud" he brought his right leg up and kicked it in the head sending the robot fly back, Max move frontward hit it again in the chest, then he used one of his hands and ripped a hole right throw it's body, "one down 8 to go".

Vortex looked at two more of the foxes and he used his natural chameleon ability and turning invisible, he then shoot lighting out of his hands at the two robots while he was invisible, after he reappeared a devilish smile appeared on his face, "hay Max, now it's only 6 to go".

Max looked at the old grey fox {something not right about this, its way too easy} he turned to see Vortex destroying 3 more robots, "Vortex!!" Max yelled seeing the last 3 coming up behind him; Max used his powers to slash them in half.

The old grey fox started to laugh and clap his hands, "well done, you destroyed my most advanced Metallic's" the fox walked around them in a circle, "but now you'll have to fight my Gen-Metallic's".

Vortex looked at Max and asked "Gen-Metallic's, what is he talking about".

"You'll see Vortex" Max said, he turned to the door that would let them in, and sure an enough 3 Metallic's walked in, the Metallic's that walked in were dark green male robot fox, black male robot fox and a purplish-red female fox, plus a lot of other Metallic's.

"Let me industrious my self before my pets kill you" the grey fox stood still in front of Max "my name is Prof. Gawl Ramos", Max started to smile at him, Gawl then yelled "why are you smiling, I'm going to have you and your friend here, killed".

Max burst out laughing hard, then he looked at the 3 Gen-Metallic's, to the surprise of Gawl and Vortex, Max yelled "NOW".

The 3 Gen-Metallics turned fast hitting all the other Metallic's in the chests and heads, the black Gen-Metallic then used it's claws to rip the metal off one of his brother's, it was like watching an wild animal killing it's pray.

Gawl screamed in anger "my creators why!!!" he fell to the ground.

The 3 Gen-Metallic's stood along side Max and Vortex, Max walked up to Gawl "after what you did to me I asked them to help, and they did so give it up loser".

Gawl looked up at him "NEVER, I'll never give up, I promised I'll kill you and all your kind and I will" he looked way at the main controls to the Black Island, "I'll started by destroying the city", he stood up and ran at the consoles and hit a series of codes into it.

Max looked at 3 Gen-Metallic's and Vortex then called "Liquid Metal, Black Hawk, Lucid, Vortex, let's get out of here NOW!!" the five left Gawl, the five ran fast down the corridors, all soon arrived in the shuttle bay.

Seconds after they had entered the shuttle bay Ash and his parents turned to see Max and Vortex with them were the 3 Gen-Metallics.

Samuel looked surprised to see Black Hawk, Liquid and Lucid, he then turned to Ash "why are three coming".

"I don't know dad" Ash replied.

Once the five had run over to the shuttle that would take them to safely, Max stopped half way to the shuttle and he turned to look back, "I'm sorry guys, I can't go"

"Are you crazy, Max, we came here to get you out" Vortex yelled.

"Someone has to stay and turn the Black Island away from the city" Max added.

Vortex walked back over to him "I through as much brother".

A confused look appeared on Max's face "what did you say".

Vortex smiled "I'm your real brother, my true name is Ra-Thunder Walker" Max's face turned to shock and disbelief, "mom, sent me to find you, she say's, she really sorry about abandoning you all those years ago and she's sorry that she can't come in person".

"I knew it, I knew had real family somewhere but I-" he was cut of when the engines on the Black Island dieing.

"We've got to get out of here," Black Hawk said, Liquid looked at him she nodded.

Ash and his parents were already in the shuttle, Black Hawk, Liquid and Vortex entered the ship, but Max stayed back.

Ash was sat in the plot seat “we have no power to engines we not going to get out”.

Vortex turned around to see Max wasn’t in the shuttle, Vortex ran to the window of the ship to see Max using his psychic abilities to kick start the shuttles engines, Vortex’s face turned pale and he tried to stop the shuttle, "Max, No stop this".

"Sorry brother, I need to do this" Max whispered.

"Max, you better come back" Vortex yelled.

Max smiled and then ran off back into the Black Island.

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Meanwhile down in the city, Scotty and the rest of the Neo Crew watched as they saw the Black Island falling.

Scotty saw the shuttle leave the Island "Ash" he whispered to himself.

Fearcat looked around at all the citizen in the area, there was no time to evacuate everyone now, Fearcat closed his eyes and said "oh god something help us".

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Back inside the Black Island Max had found the main control room, looking around he found that all the computer consoles had been totally smashed, "now what".

To the shock of Max he heard Seraph's voice in his mind and the Demon Angel then spoke “I have an idea”.

"Tell me" Max yelled at the walls.

“I'll do more then that, Max, I'll show you” Seraph replied in Max’s mind.

Without any warning to Max, Seraph took totally control over his body and changed in to his form, “sorry Max, but if I need to save the others, I needed to do this” Seraph then teleported himself outside the Black Island.

After the black hedgehog had gone Gawl walked out of the shadows smiling “it’s going just how I planed”.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Seraph had teleported himself below the deadly Island; he looked up to see it falling towards him.

"Now is the time" Seraph yelled.

He held out both of his hands and within a matter of minutes a great green pillar of light had formed and it hit the Black Island with a great force.

Seraph was using his chaos power to destroy the Black Island, as he hovered their, he yelled “Totem Guardians of Destiny, Energy give me power” Seraph yelled again.

The green blast hit and the large parts of the Black Island fell into the water, Seraph was last seen falling unconscious into the water closely followed by the largest part of the Island.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Hours after the Black Island had been destroyed, a large group of people had gathered on or around the Brooklyn Bridge, all waiting for any sign of the one who had stopped the Black Island.

The Neo Crew and Scotty's friends had found the crashed shuttle with Black Hawk, Liquid, Lucid, Vortex, Ash, Samuel and Summer inside.

Scotty was supremely happy to see both of his parents and brother ok and will, "where's Max" he then asked.

Ash looked down at the floor, he was too heartbroken to tell his brother, but he had to tell him “Scott, er he’s”.

A sound of someone walking towards the large crew was heard, no one turned, everyone was too sad with losing there friend.

The person watched the group for some time, the figure then coughed and still no one turned, "excuse me, but who just died".

Sonya was the first to look up at the figure "your ok, guys he's ok" she yelled happy, she ran over to him, everyone else turned to see a completely drenched Max.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

3 days had gone by and it was now time for the Neo Crew, Black Hawk, Liquid, Lucid and Vortex to go.

Max stood at the door to the Firefly, Scotty was stood not far away, “so here we are again saying good bye” Max walked closer to the green hedgehog “Scotty, you know your welcome anytime to come to Nimbius City”

Scotty looked at his friend “I know, Max”

Max turned and walked to the door and it closed behind, soon after that the Firefly took off back to Nimbius City.

Scotty turned to Ash and said “so what about it”

Ash looked at him confused “what about, what?”

Scotty smiled “about going to see, Max, in Nimbius City some time”

His brother looked back to the sky and Ash said “that would be real nice”

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Author’s final Notes:

Well that’s it guys, the end, not really that next thing to do is the ‘Hell Knight’ series/saga, will Scotty and Ash go to Nimbius City you have to wait and find out...

At this time the Hell Knight series/saga has 40 chapters, once finished it MIGHT have 50, I hope to have to first chapter of the Hell Knight series/saga up soon? I’m really not sure went that’ll be.

Thx’s for anyone who has read any of my stories, I really hope people likes reading my story.



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