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Scarlett Red Rose
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Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Reviews: 4 - Published: 02-22-04 - id:1744540

A/N: Be kind, I just finished reading LotF and came up with this. It's written sort of like a haiku (7-5-7). Please let me know what you think!

Blame

I am not cold hearted,

I am not barbaric, no,

It is all his fault.

The boy I hated.

Him with the flitty fire, chief boy!

Stuck on an island

Together, alone,

Forever bound, forever

Apart hating him.

Hating him and his

Friend (Sucks to your ass-mar boy!).

Piggy the Wise, dead.

I didn't step away.

I didn't leave him to fall.

He did! It was him!

Yet I didn't stop

The rock from falling. Could have.

But I did not. No.

Jack Merridew would.

Jack Merridew could have stopped.

He could have stopped it.

But it all comes to

The realization that Jack

Merridew is gone.

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