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Trust and BetrayalRedone!
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NightShadeCrimzon PM
For a long time, Blaze has been haunted by her experiences in the Krimzon Guard. Her run in with the Dark Warrior experiment, Jak, didn't end too well and now she comes face to face with him again. Note: Story is in process of major overhaul.
Rated: Fiction M - English - Angst/Humor - Chapters: 4 - Words: 6,235 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 06-29-09 - Published: 02-22-04 - id: 1745185
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I know you're not supposed to do this, but this is a brief note letting everyone know that I will be rewriting this story.
I've been getting really tired of looking at my old, horrific writing and I've gotten back into my Jak and Daxter craze.

So, I have finished the first chapter and I will replace it. I am going to make a new story to reduce confusion, and for people to laugh at my old works. It's sometimes amusing. So, it'll still be entitled "Trust and Betrayal", possibly with a "Redone" added.

Thank you all for reviewing my story and lasted through the horrid grammar. I promise things'll be better, but I do warn you, the newer version is a bit darker and more mature. I will be rating it M for violence and language. I've grown quite fond of writing violent scenes and Blaze has evolved into a foul mouthed little girl.

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