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Disclaimer: Ranma belongs to Rumiko Takahashi and Viz.
-This chapter is also due for editing; as the other is P- Might lengthen it also...
Sorry, but before you read, to answer a person’s question, Ranma did not stop Nabiki because he was in a way paralyzed when Nabiki confessed to him. I mean, wouldn’t you hesitate when a person you swore did not like you suddenly have an outburst?
Ok...and with the story
Chapter 2 – Conflicts and Problems
Nabiki groaned as she sat up, trying to shake off the feeling of nausea. Her memories were scattered. Then words fell into her head. Words she wanted to block out.
‘Who would want to be friends with a cold hearted bitch anyway?’
Ranma’s words caused a jolt to her heart. (A/n – And so starts the
“dramatic” repeat of words) Immediately, she tried to think of something
else.
“Did he really mean that?” she said, more to herself than anything.
Oddly she had heard an echo of herself. “Hello?” Again, she heard an
echo. Finally she took notice of her surroundings.
She was in a dark void that seemed to be sucking all the warmth from
her. Shivering, she analyzed her surrounding a bit more. The area was
deprived of any life forms other than herself, which to her was very
disturbing.
Deciding that she did not want to stay in one spot, she started a
slow steady pace.
-Outside of Nabiki’s mind (At the Tendo Dojo)-
“RRRRAAANNNNMMMAAAA!!” Akane’s voice pierced the air and footsteps
rang through that house as she stomped towards the dojo where Ranma was.
“What did you do to my sister?!” Obviously, Akane cared about her family
regardless of their faults. Unfortunately for Ranma, she did not seem to
care about anyone else.
“I didn’t do anything!” he exclaimed.
“Don’t lie Ranma, you always cause problems for everyone! And if you
didn’t do anything, then why is Nabiki in the hospital!” Akane retorted.
Anger swelled up inside her and an immense aura of blood red surrounded
her.
Ranma flinched inwardly. Never had Ranma seen Akane this upset. Her
face was red and contorted in rage, her knuckles white from clenching and
unclenching.
“Is that what you think of me?” Akane had to strain her ears to hear
his words. “Just a burden who causes problems? Akane let me ask you this. Do you love me?” His eyes were covered by his bangs as he averted his
gaze from Akane’s; afraid to look into her eyes. A part of him was hoping
for a yes; the other wished for the opposite.
The rage that had left her for a second when Ranma started talking
seriously came ambushing back and she yelled, “Of course I don’t! Why
would I like a pervert who hurt my sister?!” At those words, she readied
her mallet and was about to make contact with Ranma’s skull, when she was
suddenly cut by chips of wood from her mallet, which now lay in splinters
on the ground.
‘How DARE he do that! I’ll KILL him!!’ That thought was lost after
her next action.
Looking up from the position she had formed to protect her face from
getting cut by the splinters; Akane saw Ranma, his blue-grey eyes seem to
bore into her soul. Anger was evident.
On the outside, Akane was struggling to keep on a hard expression; on
the inside Akane was scared as hell.
TBC
Sorry people for not updating. I had a writers block and there were many exams at school since it is nearing the end of the year. I’ll also fill in (as a flashback) on what happened after Nabiki stabbed herself in maybe the next chapter. Oh yeah, thank you guys for the reviews TT is happy And forgive me for the grammar mistakes and typos (if there are many) English isn’t my first language. P (Is Viet) btw...I’m actually surprised some liked this story oO I have no self confidence vv