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Danica Loy
Author of 28 Stories
Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 01-14-08 - Published: 03-12-04 - id:1769950

Innocent Façade

A white bird flies

Above the heavens,

It soars on wings of purity.

I stretch out my hand

To touch the creature's wing;

White paint smears across my fingers.

The bird circles gracefully above my head,

Taunting me as though it's royalty.

Its black wings shimmer majestically under the sun.

With each elegant flap its wings grow bigger,

Blocking out the friendly sun;

I am alone.

The bird screeches and begins its diving descent,

Faster and faster, directly at me.

I can't move.

Black wings trap me within

The empty darkness.

I am drowning.

-Okay, this is in tribute to Brooklyn of Season 3, now I haven't seen much of the third season, and to be brutally honest I hate that season. Now, don't get me wrong I still love Kai, Rei and the other bladebreakers, but I kept getting turned off because of all the "magical girl transformations" that everyone was doing! It was not what Beyblade is about...I didn't think...I did however catch some of Kai's important battles, like the one with Rei and Brooklyn.

-The person who is supposed to speaking is Kai during his battle with Brooklyn. I know it's supposed to be tribute to Brooklyn but I apologize but I don't know Brooklyn well enough. I did the best I could. Also this poem is a little different from the last ones, but during the last few years, my writing style has gone through so many changes and blocks, but I'm back in the swing, and please look forward to my Beyblade story, Humans and Beasts, as well as my future work, my script to the Beyblade Abridged Series.

Until next time, Danica Loy signing off...

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