Flawed Notions?

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Has your mind vanished?
Have you let go of all rational thinking?
Will you realize?

Misplaced, you are.
Things come more than first seen.
Things come with what second thought.

Listen, for what is really being said.

The blemished mind,
It can be healed.

You see depraved things,
But you think as prudent's eye.

Be sure.

The blemished mind,
It can be healed.

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From Tomoe to Kenshin. Make him stop being an idealist hitokiri! Idealist Hitokiri? that's a good idea, I should write it down! XD

While I was writing this, i really am interested in Rumi, well, I always was, but I caught on to the abstract poems and I really love it :D
Well, is this good? I'm not sure if I should write anymore poems for this, should I? tell me what you think :o)