Author: MystDragon3k PM
A story composed of (mostly)Code:LYOKO, MYST, Metroid, and a little bit of my own material. Originally posted at the Code: LYOKO fourum, but it was rejected, so here it is. Summary is inside. (Complete!)Rated: Fiction T - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 12 - Words: 9,194 - Reviews: 23 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 08-12-04 - Published: 08-06-04 - Status: Complete - id: 2000683
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Summary:You don't age when your'e virtual. Aileta regrets this. Why you ask? Its a no brainer when you have been the slave to an evil overlord for 500 years. But with the help of her new freinds can she overcome her fears and learn lessons she thought she'd never learn?
This is my First and Probably only fan fic. (Actually I've tried posting this story before in the LYOKO section but it just didn't grab any bodys attention.) It's an AU (Alternate Universe) .It takes place in the future, so far that Aileta (still virtual) is the only surviving member, everyone else is dead (don't worry they'll return near the end). The introduction explains how Aileta ends up where she is. My fic comes from a longer story in which I don't reveal much to the public. I also use material from the games Myst (the first three of them) and the Metroid series. I chose to post it here because it was the inspiration for the story and that it follows much of the original concept. Warning: not much Ulrich/Yumi, basically an Aileta story for you LYOKO fans. Don't go looking for this in the LYOKO section for a spoiler...I deleted it.
Disclaimer: I do not own Code: LYOKO, the MYST games, or the Metroid series.
Claimer: I do own the characters Electrifying, Ikin, David, Lord Sicron and John Scout.
No flames, many nice reviews, and PG-13 for language, action, and brief female discouragement (not kidding when I say breif).
(A/N :) =Authors note
" " = Talking
' '= Thinking
= New scene
Aileta: If you don't know her you shouldn't be here
David: Normal human boy with not so human qualities (wings, tail, and good with a sword to be exact)
Electrifying: All powerful being. A god but not quite. Belongs to a race called the Electrifying (he is named after his people) (imagine a Drgonball Z character as a dinosaur) and resembles Velociraptor with electric blue armor, staff, and sword. Undefeated and creator of the void (all dimensions and parallel universes brought together into one massive galaxy)
Ikin :( pronounced eye-kin) Son of Electrifying. Spends 90% of his life in Labook writing ages (that is where Myst comes in...know what it is first, because it is a vital part of the story)
Lord Sicron: Evil equivalent to Electrifying, he has a thing for fire, which is why his armor's red. Whenever he speaks, it's in all capital letters.
John scout: Human bounty hunter...with Lord Sicron powers...you'll see what I mean.
I know that was long but it was necessary, now enjoy the story.
Location Earth, Present time
(A/N: This is to explain how the gang ends up. Earth is under attack by Lord Sicron and France is next on his list!)
Three kids sat in an old Factory. Another sat in a chair typing furiously at a computer...all knowing their time was coming.
"Man if I could only find an anti-virus, then maybe die together" said Jeremy
"Relax Einstein. Perhaps they won't even come here" Argued Odd as he grabbed a soda out of the food box Jeremy prepared.
"I sure hope you're right Odd" said Yumi. Just then Aileta's face appeared on screen.
"Hi Jeremy, how's it going" said the familiar cheerful voice
"Well let's just say things could be a lot better"
"Some superior beings from space have appeared and are taking over Ear...Eureka!" every one turned in surprise, "I found the Anti-Virus!
"That wonderful!" Everyone said at once.
"Just give me a moment to download it...done. Aileta ready to be materialized"
"NOT ON MY WATCH" called a booming voice. Just then the elevator shaft exploded, and a towering figure emerged from the flames.
"X.A.N.A!" yelled Jeremy
"HEH HEH, WRONG" and the figure raised its staff which it was carrying, and the kids were thrown against the wall. "I AM LORD SICRON. I WAS DISSAPOINTED WHEN YOUR COUNTRY DIDN'T EVEN WRITE A SURRENDER NOTE, NOW THEN." The beast walked toward the computer. "YOU ARE MORE IMPORTANT THAN YOU KNOW AILETA, BUT UNTIL THAT IS NESSESARY...YOU SHALL BE A FINE DANCING GIRL!" He raised his staff again and a stream of energy shot out from the end and struck the screen. Aileta began to scream and call for help.
"Ahhh NO NO Stop, NOOooooooooooo "
"What have you done!" yelled Jeremy
"I SIMPLY DOWNLOADED HER. NOW I WILL LEAVE YOU TO DIE AMONG THE REMAING SURVIVORS OF THIS PLANET FAREWELL" and with that the being vanished, leaving four kids to die in the flames that the evil being so loved.
(A/N:I'm going to be nice and give you the first 3 chapters as well. Also I will post a new chapter once a day. But I will post twice with enough reviews.Please read the rest of what I've given you before you review)