|Just Over Your Shoulder
Author: La Vik PM
Carmen had the world at her fingertips. Mort was running out of options, but Fate decided to even the playing field. Finally, Mort Rainey's life is starting to look up...but at what price? And what does Shooter really want from them that they can't give?Rated: Fiction T - English - Romance/Mystery - Chapters: 23 - Words: 62,981 - Reviews: 105 - Favs: 34 - Follows: 16 - Updated: 10-05-10 - Published: 08-27-04 - id: 2031590
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If any of my old readers are still around, you'll know that I have left this story untouched for a long time. I started writing it when I was about fifteen or sixteen. I'm twenty-one now, and my writing style has changed significantly. I look back at this story, and I realize that there's so much more than I can do style wise, and that I would have done a lot of things differently if I had written the story now.
So, this is what I have been thinking:
I don't want to take this story down because I have had a lot of loyal readers, and I don't plan on doing so - but I do want to rewrite it if it is something any readers would find worthwhile. It would have the same storyline, but with some finetuning - I'm seeing the faults not of being a sixteen year old trying to write things in an adult perspective.
That being said, there are only about two or three chapters left in this story, but I do want to rewrite it. So what I plan on doing is update those chapters, but also think I would like to rewrite the old ones first. So, if any old readers are still interested in this story, it WILL be updated soon, but I do want a chance to make it even better - so, if you'd like to stick around and reread it as I revise it, that would be great!
Give me your feedback as to what you all think is the best way to go with this - I will be working on rewriting chapters in between working on the story that is biggest in my mind right now, which happens to be my Harry Potter story titled "Grim Becomings: Intimations of Immortality".
Please let me know what you think I should do - replace the text of these chapters? Post the rewritten chapters as a new story entirely? I entrust myself to your wisdom, so please shoot me some feedback!