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Author: Bilbo-sama
Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Mystery - Reviews: 25 - Published: 10-20-04 - Updated: 12-28-05 - id:2102302

Waaaah, I'm sorry that I haven't updated in months! I was working on this during spring break but I got distracted by the Sims 2 (and now that I got the newest expansion pack and We Love Katamari...).

Disclaimer: I don't own Pretear. I own my store-bought copies of the manga and a couple of OCs.

And now, onto the fic!


Dark Pink

By Bilbo-sama


Last time on Dark Pink…

Mayune rushed to the balcony only to see Kouichi following Tanaka as Tanaka gave his tour down below.

“It must have been my imagination,” she muttered as she went back inside.

The Princess of Disaster smirked, “Fool.”


It’s been several days since Kouichi’s arrival. His stay was mostly uneventful except for the Leafe Knights, still on their search for the Pretear, returning with no news every evening and an odd incident where the chair he was sitting on suddenly collapsed.

It was noted that the chair was really old anyway and that helped Mayune to get away with the truth: She sawed one of the legs off and taped the leg back on. It was a test to see how the boy would react.

All he did, however, was say “I’m okay,” and got up to gently brush off a bit of dirt off his shirt.

At first, this made her wonder if Kouichi was really lying about being Himeno’s (who was known for her judo-fueled temper) son. She didn’t really have enough time anymore to do other ‘tests.’ So she waited…

On the eighth day since his arrival, Kouichi was invited to a walk by Miyako.

He first thought it was nice of her until she decided to ask him about what he remembered of his mother.

“My mother looked rather ill most of the time. At times, when she thought I couldn’t hear her through the door, she’ll be crying in her room for some reason,” he glanced at Miyako, “Everyone keeps asking me about what I know about her. Its been years since I last saw her…Say, what do you know about my mother?”

“Well,” started Miyako as they entered the park, “I’ve seen photos of her when she was a girl like me. She was rather pretty…but they’ve told me that she was the Pretear.”

“The Pretear?” asked Kouichi.

“Well, have you ever seen Sailor Moon?”

“The what now?”

“Oh dear. This is going to be rather complicated…”


“This tree’s leafe has been sapped,” said Shin as he and his fellow knights stared at a blackened tree.

“Then a demon larvae must be nearby,” Mannen deduced.

Sasame’s eyes widened as the sound of a demon larvae grew louder and nearer, “It is!”

“Sasame, go get Takako!” shouted Hayate, “See if she can still prêt after all these years!”

“Right!” Sasame then teleported.

“Shin!”

Beyondios!” A barrier made by vines sprang around the battlefield in order to keep the demon larvae in one spot. The remaining Knights prepared to attack…


“Oh, I get it now,” said Kouichi, “but how do you transform into the Pretear?”

Miyako lent out her hand as she said, “I think you had to say ‘Prêt with me’ or something…Kouichi, what are you doing?” She watched as Kouichi, as though in a trance, lifted his hand and clasped it around hers after she said the phrase. A swirl of light then bloomed.

The sudden light caused Miyako to shut her eyes. After a minute, she noted that the light was gone. And to her surprise, so was Kouichi.

“Kouichi?” she called.

“Miyako? Where am I?” said Kouichi’s voice. For some reason, it rang in her head.

“That’s what I would like to know.”

“Himeno?” said a new voice. Miyako turned to see Sasame. He looked as though he’s seeing a ghost.

“Sasame, it’s me, Miyako.” Sasame even looked more shocked.

“You’re the Pretear?”

“Have you seen Kouichi?” Miyako asked.

“Is Hayate with you?” Sasame answered.

“No.”

“Then what are you doing as the Wind Pretear?”

“I don’t know. All I remember was me explaining what the Pretear is to Kouichi…”

Realization dawned to Sasame, “Ah, so the kid really is Hayate’s and Himeno’s son.”

“What does this have to do with me?” asked Kouichi in Miyako’s head.

“I’ll explain it later. Come, we need your help, Miyako.”


Yes, I do realize that Miyako sounds like a Mary Sue (and Kouichi'stherare Gary Stu). /sweatdrops/

Next chapter, Miyako fights as the Pretear to the the Leafe Knights' shock and she and Kouichi then learn the rather unsettling fact of what happens when one Prêts with a Knight...XD

When will I update again? I dunno. I have other stories to do...ciao!



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