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Keitorin Asthore
Author of 189 Stories
Rated: K - English - Romance/Mystery - Reviews: 45 - Updated: 01-05-07 - Published: 11-07-04 - Complete - id:2125368

Disclaimer: The Incredibles belongs to Brad Bird, Pixar, and Disney, not me.

Things were a little strained between Tony and Violet. No matter where she went, there was Amie: sweet, lively, friendly Amie. Violet couldn't stand it.

What she didn't know what Tony had begun to suspect.

He was pretty smart. Smarter than she realized. Violet's sudden absences…and then an appearance by the Incredibles. How the girl in the Incredibles looked like Violet. How the entire Incredibles family looked like Violet's family.

After another date cut short by Violet dashing home to babysit her little brother again, Tony was fed up. He found his dad in the den, reading a book with a confused look on his face.

"Hey, Dad?"

"Hmph?" his father said. He turned a page.

"Can I go through some of your old papers?"

"Which ones, Ton? I've got a lot of old papers…"

"The ones you saved when your firm was suing superheroes," Tony said.

"They're in the attic, son. Big pasteboard box." And his father returned to his book.

Tony made his way to the attic. The box was tucked in the back, the masking tape peeling away from the lid with age. Tony pulled it up and coughed amid the ensuing cloud of dust, revealing a tall heap of newspaper pages and court notes. He pulled out the top page and began to read.

"More Wally World animatronics?" Violet groaned. "Whoever's behind this needs to come up with something more interesting."

Her brother ran around the animatronic, rattling its mechanisms until it shattered. "It's kinda cool!" he said. "We never go to Wally World!"

"At this rate, no one will," Mr. Incredible said. He gestured to all of the frightened tourists standing on the sidelines, clutching their children and bags of souvenirs. "With all the park's robots going haywire, they have to keep closing down to fix everything."

Violet trapped a droid in a force field. "Well, I still think-" Her voice trailed off. Among the sidelines she saw a familiar face. Tony. He stood on a bench, staring at her. Clinging to his arm was Amie.

"Violet, pay attention!" Helen shouted. Violet looked up in enough time to block the droid. She turned back. Tony and Amie were gone.

She got the note the next day. She had been expecting it. She had not, however, expected it to hurt so much when she saw Tony with Amie. But she could deal with it. First love was always the hardest, and even more so when one was a super.

It was a price she had to pay.

Author's Notes:

Aaaaand it's done. Sorry it sucks.

On the upside, this was one of the first Incredibles stories posted on the site! Yay!

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