|The Chronicles of Jim Hawkins4 The Two Gates
Author: Little Hawk PM
Little Hawk" has a true flare for originality, creating a story that was well worth reading. -a review this story recieved so read and review it !Rated: Fiction K - English - Mystery/Adventure - Chapters: 7 - Words: 7,554 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 01-14-05 - Published: 11-10-04 - id: 2128458
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Author's note: This story is dedicated to ExcursionGuy84 for being a great friend and an excellent Author! It is also dedicated to my best Friends Drew Duvall and Landon Kotchapow and Felicia Lie!! And the Whole series is dedicated to my sister and to my parents and my whole family!
Thanks y'all for your reviews and Brokenbow for the most excellent Criticism so far (so people please just leave a constructive criticism since praises and flames are things that I can't use. Well I do appreciate praises but I need more criticism!!!)
Sorry no qoute or peoms this time I havn't found and poems or qoutes to say in the beginining!
Chronicles of Jim Hawkins #4 the Two Gates
The room was dark as the mask murderer dug his razor-sharp blade deeper into Professor Gunter's chest. The man began to cry in pain as blood spurted out of his belly and began to pour down to his legs and feet.
"Now where is the key and I will spare you life" said the mask murderer in the darkness. His faced was masked and his glimmering eyes shown through the eye slits. With such defiance Professor Gunter said the same answer again ignoring the pain,
"You shall never find the key," abruptly the blade deepened into his chest. The Professor screamed in pain and with his last breaths he spoke weakly before dieing,
"The Key is hidden in..."