Hello everone! This is a story I came up with a little while ago. It's not much right now, but just you wait!

ANGEL

The prison

"Sooo…, what are we going to do now?"

"I guess we'll explore this facility and try to find anything useful, sir."

Colonel Jack O'Neill let out a desperate sigh. Boriiiiiing… But of course HE and SHE al found this wonderful. HE only wanted to find any rocks, a.k.a. artefacts, and SHE wanted to do something scientific. Lucky for him that T-man was there as well. Although…

"What up Teal'c? You're looking very confused, buddy.". Teal'c looked up from the wall close to the entrance he was looking at. "I am not truly convinced, but I believe that this is a Goa'uld building.". "What makes you think that?" Daniel asked from behind Jack. "These marks are referring to the Goa'uld, but there are also marks I do not understand. I think that this building is very old, and that this is a ancient Goa'uld language.". Daniel stepped closer, while shoving his glasses higher up his nose. "I think you're right. This must be some old accent.". "Can you read it?" Jack asked. "I believe so.". Daniel begin reading the lines, while his finger followed the words. "For as far as I can read it, it says that this building was made to keep a prisoner inside. A prisoner they still had to catch. They had failed many times, but didn't gave up.". "Than this must be the next chapter." Teal'c called from the next wall. Daniel stepped up beside him, mumbling the words while he read them. "It says that they've caught him, and that he was put away forever in loneliness, so that the Goa'uld would be rid of him.". Jack looked up in surprise. "You have any idea what they're talking about, Teal'c?". "I do not, O'Neill. This is a very old building. The story must have bin forgotten.". "Well, whoever was trapped in here, sure must be dead by now." Daniel said. Jack gave him a dark look. "Don't say that. We know the Goa'uld motto; Whatever you try, we just wont die.".

"Guy's? Could you come over here for a second? I think you wanna see this." Sam called from a distance.

Their mouths dropped open when they turned around the corner. A humongous door, engraved with difficult signs, stood before them. "Chel Nak!". "You said it, buddy!" O'Neill responded, still staring at the door. Two enormous wings were drawn on each portal, while circles and lines were neatly adjusted around them. Daniel of course, ever the linguist, started to translate the markings. "It says; we closed her heaven, let this be her hell where she dies in loneliness.". "Sounds great. Very poetic. Let's blow the damn thing up and see what's inside." Jack called, and with that, he started to walk towards what he saw as the 'doorknob'. He reached out his hand, when Sam suddenly stopped him. "Wait sir, this can't be right. If this person is so dangerous to them, than they must have locked it and foresaw it from traps.". Jack nodded in agreement, and pulled his hand back. "So, how are we going to get in?" Daniel asked. "Teal'c, try to blow a hole in this door." Jack said. Teal'c nodded, and they al stepped back. Teal'c aimed for the middle of the door, and fired, but the door didn't show a scratch. "Darn. Another one of those can't-blow-a-hole-in-it-even-if-I-used-nadaqua-things." O'Neill mumbled. Sam chuckled. Suddenly, the whole door glowed a bit. "What on earth?". "O'Neill, we are no longer on earth anymore.". "Yes, so I noticed, Teal'c." Jack replied. Again, Sam let out a soft chuckle. And again, the door started to glow for a second. Daniel stared into the distance, no doubt thinking of something, and than ran of. "He, Danny, where are you going?" Jack called after him. "To the entrance!" he replied.

When Jack, Sam and Teal'c reached the entrance, they found Daniel stepping from left to right in front of it, looking up. "Watareyoudoing?". "This door. It tells something. I think they are rules, written for those who enter this place." Daniel answered, still looking up. "What do they say?". "Whoever enters, shall not joy, shall not awaken, shall not do.". Daniel looked back down, and saw the confusion dripping from his friends faces. "Generally speaking; don't laugh.". "You guys can laugh?" Jack asked, causing Teal'c to do his eyebrow-thingy. "And when I just laughed, the door reacted." Sam said, looking like she understood it al. Jack and Teal'c on the other hand, looked more confused than before. "Don't you get it? This place reacts on laughter!" Daniel explained. "Yeah, and when I just chuckled, the door reacted a bit.". "So imagine what will happen if we all laugh!". Daniel was beaming like a little child that hat just gotten a bike. And it seemed that Sam had just gotten a pony. The two ran back in, no doubt aiming for the door. The two men stood alone, still confused. Jack looked at Teal'c. "So, what this about you Goa'uld and laughing?".

So, that's about it right now. It will get better, I promise! If anyone has an idea or comment, do tell! R&R, flames are accepted!

-xxx- Lihanou