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sasateq
Author of 4 Stories
Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Reviews: 16 - Updated: 01-19-05 - Published: 12-21-04 - id:2183212

The scars of the past are the thread that ties them together.

Chapter Seven: Another Youkai


This chapter, which may be bad as I used the same line over and over again, was an attempt to foray into the youkai side of the Saiyuki characters.

For all the people who have reviewed my story, My Sun: Rei Bianca, SheepiChan, airashal moon, Kaede-Rukawa-ice-prince and esthered.Please go check it out, and review. Any comments – positive or not – and constructive criticism are appreciated.


Another youkai
Falls to my murdering claw
And uncontrolled rage

Another youkai
The last one of a thousand
Fulfils my death curse

Another youkai
Pierced by silver bullet
Drops dead to the ground

Another youkai
Slain by crescent blade and chain
Yet by a hanyou?


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Haiku Subjects: Seiten Taisei (or Cho Gonou if you want, I suppose), Cho Gonou/Hakkai, Genjyo Sanzo, Sha Gojyo.

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