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the troublesome twins
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Rated: M - English - Humor/Romance - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 02-19-05 - Published: 01-03-05 - id:2203552

Ohhhhhhhh chapter 5!

I must admit that this is the only fic that I enjoy reading and writing. Well here's the next chapter.

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as we all sat in the doctors room in disbielif I just couldn't help but let a silent tear roll down my face. This year and place was supposed to change her life except it nearly ends her life how could I have been so stupid and leaving her by herself. Stupid, stupid, stupid, stupid.

" STUPID ME!" everyone just looked at me as I punched my fists on the desk. tala just stared at me probably thinking of something to say.

" hey man it wasn't your fault." He whispered.

" but it was tala. It ends up coming down to me. if anyone should blame this on anyone then blame it on me! tala why do I let myself get involved?" that was all I said before walking out of the room. Silent tears made their way down the stream that the previous tears made. I just sat in the waiting room with my head into my knees and my arms wrapped around them tight. Their was still no news about eiry and I was beginning to worry. what is she doesn't pull through, what then?I dunnoI know, you could end your life and spare everyone elseno, no I can't cause then I would cause suicide and die just likeur father?slowly I knew that I was fooling nobody with the stupid I-don't-give-a-fuck attitude. Slowly someone tapped my sholder I didn't look up as I couldn't be bother. I could feel that this person was frustrated but I just shrugged it off.

" I thought you would be here." I didn't bother replying.

" any way they are giving us some info on Eiry." My head shot up as Tala said her name. his eyes stuck onto mines and then probably saw the disappointment, hurt and sorrow that remained in my eyes." Hey it wasn't your fault at all, so just don't beat yourself up about it." That was all he said before giving me a reasonable sad smile. I got up and followed him to the doctors office.

general pov

everyone sat in the doctors room waiting for tala and kai. Kai and tala walked in and sorta put a reassuring smile on everyone's faces, except her dad's.

" what are you smiling at?" Miguel and bryan's smiles quickly faded into anger and rage.

" old man" began bryan " don't you dare talk to kai like that! You hear. He's at least been theior for ewiry when she needed someone." The doctor suddenly came in and just stared at the rivals eying each other up. He shivered a bit but then took his seat.

" do you want the news on eiry daxter minx or do you and her friends want to fight outside?" kai couldn't believe what he had just done. He was about to run when tala grabbed him by the hand. He knew he couldn't run from this, he had to confront his fears and not be like his father. Tala then cut in before her father could say anything.

" we, friends, want to hear the news on eiry. Everyone puts her first than themselves, she basically became part of our lifes."( hax: awwwww so cute! Sorry just had to say that. Couldn't help it) the doctor smiled at tala as he was the only one that really knew eiry I mean he did only miss 2 years of her life.

" well then, gentlemen, eiry has just came out of the transfusion and it looks like a success. She is recovering but we don' tknow if she will make it through. We just can't tell at this stage, I mean she is what, only 15 and attempted suicide. We just need to find a reason why she would this." Everyone nodded except her brother.

" I think it was mainly the families fault." Everyone, including her father, looked at the person who spoke. " I just meant that-"

" it wasn't our faults she loved us like we loved her." everyone including her brother just growled. Miguel spoke under his breath to bryan. All of a sudden there was a slam of the door and no Miguel or bryan was to be seen. Her father just shrugged them off like they were a mere eyelash on his face. This really pissed me off.

" oh yeh well the only people who knew the real reason just left the room and never once has she told us that she loved you!" I was just about to speak but tala spoke. He did know her more so if he said that he only meant the truth. I nodded my head and everyone just stared at him.

eiry's room

it was late in the evening by now and only four of them were sitting in her room hoping that she would open her eyes soon. Her father, after being told off by tala, left as he had to go somewhere. Her brother left not so long after since it was "his fault" but to be honest nobody knew who's thought it was. The only two that knew were mute and just kept their gaze on the limb body. if they did talk it was in French or German. Obviously they must of knew that nor tala or I could translate the language. As I stared at the lifeless body I felt my eyes begin to close, but before they did…

hey I know this is like the most boringest chapter but it'll be better next one. Will she open her eyes or will she just stay on the dark side forever, you decide. Please rr cause if I don't get at least 5 more then I'll call it a bust and just go back to what I normally do… draw. Oh yeh I'll put some pictrures of eiry up on my place. Please look its . then click on galleries and you'll see them. Thnx .

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