|I don't feel any pain
Author: Ale Curtis-Carter PM
Eponine's death, a little bit different. Based on the Play. Please re-read the first chapter, I added somethign at the end I want all whose read it to see.Rated: Fiction K - English - Words: 475 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 02-20-05 - Published: 02-19-05 - id: 2271580
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Maybe one-shot, maybe longer. Depends what you, the reader/reviewer wants. Based on the play, not the book. I'm warning you, I'm changing the way it went. Well that's kind of obvious, I would think… Thanks for reading!
Eponine was making her way to the barricade, she had just been shot. She couldn't hold on much longer.
'I have to hold on…' She thought. 'I have to hold on to say bye to Marius.' She kept walking and she finally reached the barricade.
"Eponine!" Marius cried when he saw her wounds. Gavroche's head turned to the sound of his sister's name. He then saw her wounds and just as Marius, he cried out.
"Eponine!" He ran over to where Marius was holding her. "Eponine." He said much softer this time. Tears began to stream down Gavroche's face.
"Come, Gavroche." Grantaire said attempting to pull Gavroche away from the horrible sigh of his sister.
"No…no…Eponine…no…" Was all Gavroche could manage to say. Grantaire, being much bigger and stronger than Gavroche managed to pull him away.
"Oh, Eponine." Marius said to her refusing to believe that this girl he had taken for granted all the time he'd known her could be possibly dying. "Eponine, you're strong! You've always been strong! You can recover!"
"Don't you fret, Monsieur Marius, I do not feel any pain, a little fall of rain, can hardly hurt me now…"
"Oh, Eponine, no, Eponine, you can't." Eponine couldn't hold on any longer.
"I love you, Marius, good bye." The last thing Eponine heard before she died was what she had always wanted to hear.
"I love you too." Marius whispered kissing her forehead. Gavroche had finally managed to break free of Grantaire's grasp and ran to where Eponine lay, lifeless.
"Eponine! Eponine!" He yelled over and over while, along with Marius, he cried.
Well? Anyone like it? Anyone hate it? If you don't like it, please don't be nasty about it; tell me why you don't like it, maybe I can fix it. Would you like me to continue it? Or would you like me to leave it there? And I just wanted to say, we're doing this play in school and Eponine is my favorite character! PLEASE REVIEW!
Hey all. I just wanted to say, this is my first Les Mis fanfic so I am not familiar with what has been done and not done. I wanted to thank ArgentineRose for not being mean about it. By the looks of it so far, it seems that I will leave it here. I apologize for being so unoriginal, I just wasn't familiar with the fact that this has been done a lot before. Sorry. And thanks again, ArgentineRose.