|The Revan Chronicles I: The Outer Rim Wars
Author: Master Alabe PM
Set 2 weeks after KOTOR I, a male light side Revan travels towards the outer rim to wage war against the 'real' Sith. How will he cope leaving his love, Bastila, behind... and how will he compare to these 'real' Sith? Please R&RRated: Fiction K+ - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 4 - Words: 4,595 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 01-03-06 - Published: 03-31-05 - id: 2331252
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Hi everyone :-)
Haven't updated this story in ages, sorry about that... but here is the 4th Chapter!
The Lady Revan: Thanks so much for reviewing! I wanted to show how the Dark Side effected him. Hope it worked!
Bjrn Fallqvist: Thanks for the review :-)
Nyviay and Cyraxis: Thanks for the review! That's exactly what I was trying to do, show his inner torment. Thanks again :-)
Right, so here is Chapter 4. Hope you all enjoy, please review!
Disclaimer: All things Star Wars: KOTOR I & II are owned by LucasArt, Bioware Corp. & Obsidian.
4. Destination - Veli'on
Darkness, so much… darkness. Ever since he had arrived upon this planet, there had been nothing but darkness. Not that it bothered him; a fierce warrior such as Revan had no reason to fear the dark, however… it had worried him a little.
"(Huff) – Doesn't this planet ever have sunlight? I don't understand. I've been here for more than a day in Coruscant time… what's going on here?"
It was true. For 27 hours Revan had been wandering this planet, and he had seen nothing but darkness. There was moonlight, but that was starting to look like all the planet could offer, and in this 'light'… if that's what you would call it, all he had seen were endless deserts and huge cliffs. No water, no food, no civilisation. Not even a puddle. It just didn't make sense.
"Why would they send me here? This planet has nothing to offer me, and no enemies to conquer. It just doesn't make sense… or… does it? Have they sent me here to… to die? No water, no food, and no residents to offer help… it seems too much of a coincidence to ignore. But why? Why would they do this? Punishment for my past life? They capture me, wipe my memory, use my power against my comrades, and then… dispose of me. Plotting against me all along! They've wiped out the Sith rebellion, leaving no evidence! Why did I… not see it?"
Down hearted, Revan found a nearby rock and proceeded to sit down, his back leaning against the rock. Uncomfortable it may have been, but it was the best this planet could really offer him. He closed his eyes, meditating on what he had thought. He knew such thoughts lead only to the Dark Side, but what else could all of this mean? Could it simply have been a mistake? Tired, slowly his body began shutting down, yearning for some well needed rest…
'Attention all passengers. Flight status report. Destination… Veli'on… approaching descent into planets atmosphere. Please comply with Republic Laws. All passengers should now find appropriate seating positions for landing.'
This startled Revan. He looked around. First left, then right. The moonlight was still dimly lighting the planet, but still… all Revan could see was desert, and the occasional cliff, immense in height.
"What the…? What the hell was that?" Revan shouted in shock.
'Repeat - Attention all passengers. Flight status report. Destination… Veli'on… approaching descent into planets atmosphere. Please comply with Republic Laws. All passengers should now find appropriate seating positions for landing.'
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"Huh?" Revan jolted up from his slumber. His eyes still adjusting to the blinding light surrounding him, he clambered out of the bed and slowly stretched his arms out above him. Had it all been a dream? It seemed that way, but Revan was stilled too tired and startled to be able to think straight.
"What was that voice? I… can't remember, what did it say?" Revan questioned himself, utterly confused by the whole situation.
'Passenger 01. Heat signature found within Cabin Area 01. Please find suitable seating position for landing.'
"We're landing?" Revan questioned the computer-generated voice calmly. He quickly changed into some more comfortable clothes, and approached the cockpit. He approached with care, as it was still hard to see past the blinding light. The ship was beginning to shake violently, and as he found the cockpit, he soon found the source of the light penetrating the entire ship. Out of the cockpit window, he could clearly see a planet.
"Veli'on I presume…" Revan stated, staring out at the beautiful planet. He could only stare for a few seconds, as promptly the solid steel cockpit security door closed around the cockpit window. Feeling the ship shaking slightly more violently, Revan decided to take a seat within the cockpit. Tightening the safety belt around him, he closed his eyes. Soon the landing procedure would be over, and he would have to venture out onto this planet.
"Soon, this adventure of mine will truly begin…" Revan stated.
Hope you all enjoyed, please review... and thanks again for all of your support up til now :-)
Til next time...