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SiriusFan13
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Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Battousai - Reviews: 13 - Published: 04-13-05 - Complete - id:2349651

Disclaimer: I own nothing Ruroken. Sorry...

Author's Note: Set during Bakumatsu. A peek into the mind of Battousai. Please review!


Fallen

One quick cut.
Jump.
Two more.
And again.
My Blind eyes
Only see targets.
I leave them No time to scream.
I am a sword
Souless metal.
Wield me.

I cut,
Jump,
Turn…
Turn from the crimson rain.
Can't let it touch me.
I might feel
Darkness swallows me.
I am a shadow.
Only a shadow of what I was.
See how I have
Fallen.


Author's Note 2: Hello! Just a quick poem that popped into my mind VERY early this morning. I'm not really one to write poetry much (okay... I almost never write it), but the idea of Battousai seeing himself as "fallen" was such a strong image. I started it as one-shot prose, but somehow it automatically became a poem... Weird...

Anyway, my first poem posted here, so please review... I'd love some honest feedback on it!

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