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Summary: Same scenario as other fictions, girl get sucked into favorite game. Only what if she was turned into something other than an Elf. I know bad summary. This is my first fiction. So please be nice and patient.
Write more soon, it's good and I like it!
GoodMorningBeautiful2005: Thanks. This will be the last chapter in this story. wink wink
EyesLikeSilk: I never threatened you.
Why do you guys always result to foul language? Does it make you feel tougher over the internet or something? Jeez. I just gave you an honest opinion that you obviously could not handle.
I'm sorry, but you can't expect to always get praising reviews. And don't feel bad, cuz I get some pretty... negative... reviews myself.
Try to understand this issue from both sides.
Some people enjoy Mary Sues... whereas some people see them as the same theme recycled again and again to the point that they have to slog through all the Mary Sue fics just to find one rare original fic that isn't. Lack of diversity in the fandom is ultimately what'll make it go downhill. Ya know, lack of new ideas.
Of course, you can take that as you will. Tell me to shove it up my ass or whatever. Such language over the Internet doesn't insult me anymore.
-ELS-
GoodMorningBeautiful2005: Sorry about Bitching at you in my story earlier this week. I do appreciate your inpute on my stories, as I'm sure you appreciate my inpute in your stories too. I just had a very bad week, that's all...SORRY!
Afeenaninganing: Pretty cool, thougth you got Keira mixed up with yourself and lil' Jak. My self-insert Sucked In. I've alterd it to make it more, realistic' please read.
Mary-Sue Destroryer's a bitch 'aint she. I got shit off her as well
GoodMorningBeautiful2005: Sorry, didn't mean to get the names mixed up.
Moon-Angel-Eyes: This is a very good story, but you also need to update your other stories as well. Also, Mary-Sue Destroyer deserved what was coming to her..
GoodMorningBeautiful2005: I'll be updating Pending Chaos Soon. Thanks for your Reviews.
Well on with the story...
(Serena's POV)
"Welcome to the Naughty Ottsel! The hippest, happenest, happiest joint in town! Daxter grinned happily at everyone in the former Hip Hog Heaven bar, "Check out the new decor! He said pointing to Metal Head Kor's head. Jak and Serena just rolled their eyes.
"Oooh... What a big trophy!" Tess looked up at the large Metal Head that was hung over the bar, it was the head trophy of Kor.
"As if size matters! I bagged that bad boy myself, baby! The Ottsel bragged.
"Onin says she doesn't know who has a bigger head. Him or you!" The annoying monkey-bird laughed as he sat upon Onin's head.
"We must not forget Vin and all the others who sacrificed their lives to defeat this evil and protect the child," Samos spoke up. Jak sat at the bar next to Keira, he opened up his hand that held the Amulet of Mar.
"I still can't believe... that little boy was me. Better times, huh?" He looked down at his hand depressingly.
Keira walled up to Jak and said "You miss him, huh?" Keira smiled, "You know, the kid grows up to be a handsome hero!" Jak smiled back. I decided that I should jump off Jak's shoulder, as they began to lean in towards each other to finally kiss but was interrupted by the furry, orange rodent...again... He was glaring at the old soothsayer who was currently drinking out of a blue vile.
Hey! That's enough for you, lady. I'm cuttin' ya off! Daxter began to march over to the old elf but was zapped to the other side of the counter as the soothsayer waved her hands angrily at him.
"Trust me, she gets real mean when she's like this!" Pecker squawked.
"What'd she say?" The Ottsel asked.
"Something about rubber tubing and certain parts of your mother..." the Monkaw translated, "you don't wanna know..."
Suddenly, the doors to the entrance burst open and a large figure strode in.
"Agghhh! A Metal Head!" The rodent jumped behind the counter, but Jak recognized the figure.
"Sig!" He cried out joyfully.
"Sig!" Daxter popped his head out from behind Pecker, "I knew that."
"Right". I said mockingly
"I did". He said as Tess picked him up.
"You saved the city and more, my boy!" Samos congratulated the dark elf as they stood outside of the Naughty Ottsel, "Metal Kor and his menace are history, and somewhere out there, an ancient race has begun again."
"I'm just glad to be back home," Jak sighed.
Home I thought to myself as I walked away from the group. If only…
"Yeah? Well, rest up. We've got a lot to do and so much time to do it in!" The Green Sage exclaimed.
"Don't say 'time!' The Rift Ring was destroyed, remember?" Jak groaned.
"You know, my momma used to read me bedtime stories about Mar when she'd tuck me in," Sig sighed, "she'd give me a nice glass of warm yakow milk... and my little Poopsy bear."
"Bedtime stories? Warm milk? Poopsy bear!" Both Daxter and I stared up at the Wastelander in disbelief.
"Buddy, ya just blew ya image!" I said
"I've got a feeling we'll meet Mar someday. He may be closer than you think," Samos said mysteriously.
"You're the designated driver!" Sig grinned as he handed the Ruby Key to the city to Jak.
"Oh no. I am done with adventures. Besides, you'll tell us before something happens next time, right Samos?" The green/blonde haired elf looked to the Sage who had an innocent look upon his aged face, "Right, Samos?"
I stood off to the side watching Daxter and Pecker fighting each other over something. I didn't know what they were fighting over because, well, I was in another world myself.
Well, that was it. I had lived the game. Now what. Wasn't it over, didn't I get to go home now. After all, it was just a game. Right?
"Hey Toots". Diamond said to me. I looked at him then back to the sky.
"I know you don't like me and all". he began, "but that doesn't mean we can't be friends does it?"
What the heck, I thought to myself, and as they say, "Hey Diamond, have I ever told you where I come from"?
"No, I don't believe you have". He said
"Let me buy you a drink and I'll tell ya". I said smiling.
Hey as they say, "If you can't beat 'em, join 'em". I thought to myself as I walked into the Naughty Ottsel, and boy was I going to have FUN!
Also my profile has been updated as well.
Many thanks go to. Everyone!
Thank you for reading my story. Some of you that have inspired me,a special Thanks. To the others, thanks for just reading my story and giving me the ideas that I needed to make this a good story.
