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Drager
Author of 13 Stories

Rated: T - English - Adventure - Nabiki - Reviews: 67 - Updated: 05-29-08 - Published: 07-16-05 - id:2487953

Disclaimer- I do not own Ranma 1/2 or Tokyo Mew Mew (Mew Mew Power)

There are notes at the end:

The fresh morning light lit Nabiki room. Her eyes blink a few times as she look strait forward. Her body did a great job at repairing and reading itself for the day. It did not help waking with her problem nestled in her arms. She hopes that it and her fox ears are gone. She curl her finger of her right hand and then rub her right eye with the back of her hand between he thumb and finger and then she did the same with her left side.

Nabiki heard a knock on the door. Nabiki thrust the pillow over her head. Then she heard her elder sister call to her, “Nabiki, you need to get up for school.”

“Better not make anyone suspicious,” Nabiki moan before she rolled out of her bed. Her hand drifted over to her pendent. She opens her closet and grabs her school uniform resting on a shelf. She looks over the pile to make sure that all of her uniform was there. Before she left her room, she looks for any fox parts in a mirror behind the door. With her uniform in hand, she made her way to the bathroom.

In it, she places her clothes on a counter. She locks the door. She grabs a stool and moved it to block the door. Feeling sure that the door is secured, she opens the cabinet below counter and then pushes a few old bottles of shampoos. She pulled out a light green plastic basket. In it were her private bathing supplies. She never trusted the ones left out after her father dye his hair violet using a shampoo left out. After a little research, she found out that she was the target for it by one if those that own her money. Worst with Ranma as the bull’s-eye for many strange events, it never hurt take a few extra precautions.

Nabiki look over each plastic bottle making sure that she had enough to clean her body with. She drops a bottle in the basket. Then she covered her eyes and took deep breaths. She slips from her knee to her hip as continue to take deep breaths. Finally her breathing returned to normal. “Stay calm,” Nabiki said, “Nothing bad will happen today.” She stood up and went to her bathing.

Later, Nabiki came to the dinning room. She sat at her normal place. She lowered her head as if looking at her food but her eye rises up to glance at the others. “Nabiki,” Kasumi said, “Something wrong with the food. If you want something else, I’ll gladly make something else.”

“This is fine,” Nabiki said.

While eating, the one thing that Nabiki did not want to deal with came up. “I still ashamed of you boy,” Genma said, “Letting a girl do you fighting. Everyone knows that girls are…” He paused to recover from the mallet that Akane spent at him. Soun broke into water fall crying as he proclaim that his little girl dose not respect her elder. He was silent the same way that Genma was.

Nabiki raise another bit of food to her mouth when she heard her name. She drops her food. She looks at each of the others at the table. She failed to find the one that called her until Kasumi spoke, “Nabiki, you seam to be acting strange for a few days now. You have more energy.”

“I just change the way I live,” Nabiki said, “If you excuse me I need to get to the school.” She got up from her chair and ran from the room. Everyone in the household hug the doorframe to watch. Nabiki stop at the closet closest to front door she pulled out an umbrella. She opens the front door and walk outside.

In an ally along the way to school, Nabiki rested there. ‘Stupid Mew Mew power,’ Nabiki thought, ‘Making me like Ranma fighting someone with a picture of a cat on their clothes. I’ll save that if I need Ranma to lose.’ She reaches up to her head rubbing a new pair of fox ears. ‘Please don’t be long,” Nabiki thought.

A little later, Nabiki ran as fast as she could. Each breath stabs her with pain. He school bag beat her side as the umbrella did the same to her other side. When she got to her coworkers, she fell into a sitting place. Her back hit the ground. Her heavy breaths still stung as pain flourish in her legs.

Nabiki just stair at the blue sky as her helpers came into view. She knew little of them other than their name and some of their skill. It made it easier to replace them if they need to be if you were not friendly with them. She could see frowns on their shadows covered faces. Collapsing in front of you worker will make you lost respect but Nabiki legs could not hold up after moving longer and faster than they have in years. On head grew larger. She her knows the best; her so call second in charge, Ashley Hebigyou. She moved her after her mother retired from the US Air Force. Nabiki has turns down many of Ashley’s ideals because they are beyond what Nabiki is welling to do.

“Hey boss,” Ashley said, “You seam out of it.” A smiled came on her face. “You should rest while we’ll take care of the bets.”

“Fine,” Nabiki said, “I have a feeling the fights will be short so set the bets based on that.”

“We can handle this,” Ashley said, “You just rest a little.” She pats Nabiki’s head and turn to the others. “Alright,” Ashley told the rest of the group, “The boss is laying on the job and we need to handle this alone.” Nabiki watch the fight smiling that she knew two of participants in the daily fights. She pushes herself to her feet. She watches the upper classmen and income source slide before her. He slides past Nabiki as she open her umbrella. She looks down at Kuno with a small wet spot in his forehead. Soon there was a beat on her umbrella.

Nabiki watch the other run to the front door of the school. Over their pounding and pleads, Nabiki could hear the Janitor yelling, “I can’t open these doors for another five minutes and thirdly five seconds. The rules must be obeyed. I can’t open this for five minutes and twenty second.”

Nabiki rolled her eyes at the abyss of stupidest that panic cause. She looks at the upper classmen near her feet. “You’re luckily you’re a major source of income,” she grunted. She rests the shaft of the umbrella on her shoulder and then she bent her neck to pin it there. She lowers herself to grab Kuno underarms. Kuno foot drag as Nabiki made her way to the side entrance. Her hair became entangle in metal skeleton of the umbrella.

She came to the door and then drop Kuno arm to open the door. She wedges the door with her shoulder. Slowly Kuno was move into the hall. Nabiki arch her back and stretch her arms. Nabiki then made her way to her class.

On top of a nearby building, lips twist to say, “I love the rain. It makes trees heath and people run in terror. It’s time to find a creature to test.” The woman pushed to her feet and made the way alone the wet roof. “This fox tail girl may be a problem,” she said as she beat the dust from her red dress. Gravel scrap against gravel as she made her way to the build board. She came to a pipe with chirping coming from it. Her lips warp into a smile as she rolled red ooze into the pipe. “Become a beautiful destroyer.”

Nabiki found herself listening to the teacher and taking notes just to her mind blank. Sleep almost took her a few times as she listen to the teacher and the drumming of the rain. For once luck was on her side as the rain stop early enough that the student may leave building for lunch. Shivers went down her spine went down her spine when she though saw herself with her new fox appendage out while she was trap in the large room with the other students. At least now she could make a run for it.

Now, she sat under a small tree with a cocktail of emotion. Nervous that her furry tail and ears will come out in public, glad that the day was haft done, and a little mad that she forgot her lunch. To run from them, Nabiki open her business ledger. She flips to the section covering debts. She frowns as she finishes fingering the sums. The newest loan was made three weeks ago and the others are nothing but small change easily paid off. Someone new is playing the money leading game. Just then a shad covered the book.

“Here,” Nabiki’s younger sister said dropping something on her ledger. “You forgot you lunch,” Akane said.

“Thanks,” Nabiki said. She let the ledger slip between her knees as she grabs her lunch.

Akane sat next to Nabiki. “You know that Kasumi be worry about you,” the youngest sister said.

“I’m fine,” the so called Ice Queen said, “I’m just trying something new.”

“Listen if anything is bothering you, you can tell me,” Akane said.

“What’s with this change?” Nabiki asked, “This morning you were throwing hammers at anyone who said a thing to you and now you’re trying to be nice to me.”

“It because that fox tail woman,” Akane grunted as she curled into a fist, “I’m sick and tired of these girl keep showing up and out shows me. I’m the best female but no one will believe as long these others around. The first step is showing I’m the best is to defeat this fox tail girl. Of course as my sister you will help me.”

“My dear sister, if I help you then other would say that you won with my help but if she wants to hurt you I’ll try to help you free of charge.” As Akane walk away, Nabiki started pulled out her food. Soon another shadow was drape over her. “Yes,” She said. She smiled at the new arrival, “Kuno Baby it’s good to see you.”

“Please,” Kuno said, “Give a noble samurai like me the proper respect.”

“What no poetry no flashy monolog. I’m hurt. Anyway, here is you stander purchase.” Nabiki pulled out a large pale envelope. “The price is written on the envelope.”

“Very well,” Kuno said replacing the envelope with some cash. “Little extra for dragging me out of the rain. Now to new matter. A new love was gracefully stumble into life. Oh my fox tail girl, my delicate warrior. Her sight fills me with a peaceful conflict.”

“I’ll see what I can do,” Nabiki said. ‘Great,’ Nabiki though as food enter in her mouth, ‘Three are on a fox hunt. Ranma want me to train him in what he think is an art style that he never seen before. My own sister wants to beat me. The last wants me to take pictures of myself. I’m not Peter Parker.’

“Hay boss,” one her coworker said as they enter the shade of three. “I heard that Ranma got in a fight with a girl with fox ears and a tail.”

“I heard that she won the fight,” Another said.

Nabiki rub her head. She could feel her brain working with her hands “Let’s not jump to an answer,” Nabiki said, “Have any of you even heard Ranma hitting a girl knowingly. Why would he change just now? I was there when they talk about it. There was a monster that they could not hurt but the girl was able to.”

“No matter what happen,” Ashley said, “They are those that are willing to pay to meet the person that out shin the great Ranma more to see it.”

“We can’t do that,” Nabiki yelled.

“There must be something wrong with my ears,” Ashley said aw she make a smug smile. Nabiki could almost make out poison fangs. “Is Nabiki turning down a source of money?”

Nabiki froze for a little bit. “This fox tail girl could be long gone by now,” Nabiki said, “Wasting money with out knowing that there is an income is not worth it.”

“It seam our boss is a little airhead when she has an empty stomach,” Ashley said, “Lets leave her to lunch.”

With that Nabiki was alone but for the smell of the rain still strong in the air. Nabiki sat there only until lunch as over. She made her way to class preparing for more mindless note taking and doodling. To her surprise, the office called for her. Nabiki walk down the abandoned halls. She enters the office to see her older sister there.

Kasumi stood up and walk to Nabiki. “We need to get going,” Kasumi said. Outside, Kasumi spoke once more, “We’re leaving early so you can get some training and I can get the kitchen ready. I also ask for someone from the other café to help until we get more help.”

Nabiki came to the café to see the red head from the other day. She wore a brown school uniform with her hair tied into very short pigtail on each side of her head. “Hi,” She said coming up to Nabiki, “We never introduce each other and since we’re going to work together. It will be nice to help. I’m Ichigo.”

“Nabiki.”

“Ichigo could you show my sister what she will be doing while I clean the kitchen.”

Nabiki was then drag by younger girl to the side of the café. They came to a door with “Employee only” written on it. Nabiki was pulled into a room. It was had white walls with lockers on the wall and there was a wooden bench. “This is where we change into own uniform or street clothes,” Ichigo said, “We should change. Your is in the one closest to the door.”

“I’m not wearing this,” Nabiki said, “It like a French maid during Halloween.” She pulled out a bright orange dress.

“It comes with the job,” Ichigo said, “You may find that it look good on you.”

Seconds later, Ichigo heard. “I don’t believe it.”

The red head turn to her fellow waitress. Nabiki was looking at herself in the mirror. Her shoes her black with light orange hearts on them, the same color trim the soul, and was tied up with show lace the same color. To finish it was the same orange color sox. She wore an under skirt with riffles in it. The top riffle skirt was orange with a light orange line. Her shoulder was puffy with a light orange sheave traveling a little longer. Her caller was turn up with a light orange trim. Her white apron was covering most of her top with wide wavy trim. The part that covers the skirt uses the trim to make a heart that bubble out a little. Lastly it was tied into a large bow in the back with the remaining ribbon following down. To finish it she wore a white clothe tiara with the light orange close to the spikes on it. To finish up was a light orange bow just below her neck.

Nabiki made her face into her Ice Queen stair down but it came out as angry girl. She tried her Ice Queen negotiating face but it came out as ignored girl. She even tries her sinister gin but that came out as prankster caught.

Ichigo, feeling that she let Nabiki spend enough time looking over at her, spoke up, “Cute right.”

“I was thinking of how they could have known my size,” Nabiki said, “I’ve only have two meeting with them.”

“That is strange,” Ichigo said, “Time to show you what we’ll be doing.”

“There something I want to know. Like, how many other …” Nabiki lower her voice. “Mew Mews are there?”

“There six,” Ichigo said, “With me and you. We all are waitress at the Mew Mew Café,”

“What about these powers?”

“It something like animal powering us or something like that. I think it was something we were born with but it was not active. Is there anything else you want to know?”

“What I need to be a waitress?” Nabiki asked.

“I’ll show you,” Ichigo said. She led Nabiki into kitchen and then into the main dinning room. The main doors were large with a stain glass arc over it. Along the lime green wall were tan pillars with hearts at the top. The blue roof move to a dome that had a fairy tale painted on it. The small table where white and round. The chair had red cushion with the white frame making to white hearts with a red between it. Lastly there was a small tan booth coming from the wall. In it was the cash register.

“It look just like the other café,” Ichigo said, “Anyway, I’ll show what you need to do and a few hints I learn.” She started with taking the order, then getting the order to the table, using the register and lastly cleaning the table.

A little later Kasumi walk into the room and said, “We still have some time. Nabiki why don’t you tell Ichigo about local events. I’ll do a little cleaning up before we open. Also Nabiki remember to smile and to be cheerful to our customers.” Nabiki gave her older sister one of her Ice Queen stair down. A look that ended negotiation at a greater price than the original was. “Nabiki you look adorable.” Nabiki found herself in a strong hug from her sister.

“Let’s talk in the changing room,” Nabiki said. In the changing room, Nabiki was resting on the wall as Ichigo sat on the nearby bench. “Where to start? Well…There are some locals that have problems with water. Put it simply cold water changes them and warm water returns them to normal.”

“You know this joke is not funny,” Ichigo said.

“I’m not joking. Just trust me on this. There a lot that happens around here.” Nabiki started to tell the story of the events that has happen.

Just then Kasumi walk into the room. “Girls,” She said with immortal sweet voice, “I just open the door and we’re filling up.”

“Time to get to work,” Ichigo said. Both girls peak through the door leading to the main room. “Why are there some many?” The air was overflowing with the talk from the people that took every chair.

“We better go out there,” Nabiki said, “You don’t want to see this group mad.”

Silent filled the room as Nabiki walk from in front of the group. She striated her apron and made where way to her first table. The silent was pauses by her older sister yelling for her to smile and be cheerful. At the table she found Ranma and Akane and the other two chair missing. As innocently as she could she ask, “May I take you order?”

Just then Nabiki’s her were bombarded with everyone screaming their order to her. Each order clashes with the others making a mush of worthless sounds that enter her ears. Nabiki just stood there looking at the grins of the many who where yelling orders at her.

“Quite,” Ranma yelled, “I’m trying to order.” Unconcern about his power to bring peace to the room, Ranma started to order, “It would like the three ice creams sunday.”

“Just a milk shake,” Akane said.

As Nabiki grab the menu, she told her younger sister, “I know you have something to do with this.”

“I just told a few friends during lunch,” Akane said.

“I’ll bring them out as soon as I can,” Nabiki said walking to the kitchen to drop off the order. She then made her way to the next table. She moans finding Ashley and five other of her workers. She took a deep breath and then said, “Welcome.” She forces a smile. “May I take your order?”

“I would like some chocolate Ice Cream, Ice Queen,” Ashley said. Nabiki nodded as she too the other orders. As Nabiki gather the menus, Ashley said, “Make it fast. We have business that needs to handle since our boss is not here. Got that?”

Nabiki nodded and made her way to the kitchen. She was stop by two words, “Foul Sorcerer”. Nabiki turn to see Kuno walk to Ranma. Nabiki turn to see Kuno walk to Ranma as me made a long winded speech about the “evils” that Ranma has done. “Stop,” Nabiki yelled but Kuno continue to move closer to Ranma. Nabiki rolled her eyes thinking of only one thing to stop Kuno blood from staining the floor. She ran to Kuno and tried to push the rambling wannabe samurai back. She found her slowly moving closer to Ranma. Ichigo join Nabiki in pushing Kuno. ‘Don’t make me go Mew Mew,’ Nabiki though as they still slowly moves to Ranma.

In the kitchen, Kasumi was making the order when she heard Nabiki and Ichigo yelling over someone else constants talk. In the dinning room she saw the two waitresses try to keep a male teenager away from Ranma. “Oh my,” She said running up to the young man. “Sir,” she said, “With you horror please respect this building and not fight in it.”

“I will horror your request but if Ranma perform any evil magic then I am bound by my code to stop him,” Kuno said before walking away to take a sit.

Nabiki handed the order to her sister and made to the next table. There sat Shampoo and Cologne. “Little one,” Cologne said, “We here checking out the completion. I just can’t find a meal.”

“We don’t sell meals,” Nabiki said, “We mostly sell snack like food and sandwiches. Also we don’t deliver.”

“Then, I’ll have the strawberry cake and Great-Granddaughter will of the fruit blend.”

“I’ll be out with it as soon as I can,” Nabiki said.

Nabiki enter the kitchen and drop off the order and pick up two orders which by pure luck is Ranma and Ashley’s tables. She drops off the orders and on the way back she took an order. She stops to take more orders. By the time she got into the kitchen she had three orders.

The light that came from the stain glass faded. A building rumble as dust fell from the roof. The roof shakes once more as the column slip. Nabiki watch the cracks spread over the roof. A load screech filled the café. Then the large doors busted off the wall. With one spinning kick Ranma force the two doors away from the others.

Ichigo and Nabiki ran to where the doors were. They watch as a huge bird fly past them. It was all black but for its gray head. It flew over building. Dust and debris erupts from the building with the bird wings thrust down. Ichigo blink as a man with a long ponytail pass her. She pressed to the wall when more follow him. In the café, she found everyone acting normal but for Nabiki, who slip into the kitchen. She soon follows. She found Nabiki found in the changing room. The fur on her tail and ears was fluff out. IT took Nabiki a few minutes before she started to breathe once more. “You know this building took a lot of damage and it will be safe if we left it until we know for sure.”

“I’ll tell you sister,” Ichigo said.

A little later Ichigo were outside. “Mewtaphor,” both yelled.

“Wow,” Ichigo said looking over them. “Our cloths are almost the same but your is orange and you have the armbands.” Just then Nabiki’s armband glowed and a park pink glow came from Ichigo’s forearms. Moment later, Ichigo has armbands like Nabiki but they were dark pink. Nabiki look at her naked forearms “What going on?”

“I don’t care.” Nabiki said walk walking away the girl with cat ears and tail. “There a monster lose and if it like the other one. I wouldn’t place bets on our local powerhouses.” Ichigo nodded and the two ran after the bird.

They ran into a could of building tears. On the roof, Nabiki use her hand the cloud of dust from the crumbled building away from her eyes. Just then Nabiki felt her gut move upwards. She looks down to cracks slowly slithering around them. Their footing became weaker as the rush the safety of another roof. As Nabiki jump from the roof, she could feel thousand part of the building rub the back of her neck.

Ichigo help Nabiki to her feet. Nabiki follow Ichigo over the roofs with cracks of ruble. They came to the large bird hovering over a few of the local martial artists. It thrust it wings down forcing Ranma to make a crater in the road. “They can’t hurt it,” Nabiki said.

The monster bird lower to the roof top level. It then screeches at the approaching fighters. “Hey.” The bird looks up at two silhouette of two female with pointy ears. “Since you’re done with the martial artist, why not try us Mew Mew.” The moment their black outlines were filled with color, Nabiki face went red and it only got worst when she heard the comments.

“It my fox tail warrior.”

“Great another one,” Akane grunted.

The bird screech then it fanned it wing around it body forcing two feathers to fly close to the Mew Mews. Nabiki listen as the feather past by her ear. Her tail was shoves away from the feather ripping through the air. She could hear the sound of the feather slowly dime but then grow loader. Then she felt the wing caused by the feather pashing where she just leaps from.

Ichigo ran along the roofs along the left side of the bird. She jumps at the wing. Flames flow from her hands. “Fire Strike,” She yelled as her fist hit the wing. As she fell past the smoking wing, Nabiki jump at the other wing. Nabiki forearm glowed before she screams, “Fire strike.”

The two Mew Mews land on the street follow by the bird. The bird clime onto it talons with the fire eating the feathers. It flung its wing forward. Heat ran past Nabiki neck as she duck. Then she rolled from the talon thrust at her. Nabiki and stood up as dust drifted on her.

Then it tries to stab Ichigo with its beak. Ichigo jump form the spear like beak. She landed on her hand and feet look much like an animal. She stood next to Nabiki. The bow on her tail vanishes as she pink heart shape object. “I had enough of you,” She yelled. She looks over at Nabiki holding the same thing only orange. Like the day before, Nabiki over lap the two gems as Ichigo did the same. The two beams hit the giant bird covered with ash. Te bird scream as the wind slowly took it away one small red practical at a time.

Sitting on a near building, a woman snarl at the two mew mews jumping onto a fence then a roof. “Look like I need to get more creative with the Jellsters,” The lady said as she beat some dust off her red dress. “This battle has just started.”

On another roof, Nabiki and Ichigo are running from Ranma. “How is he able to keep up with us?” Ichigo asked as the two jumps over the gap between to building.

“Ten years of training,” Nabiki said. Her ears twitch up as she smiled. “Can you Meow like a cat?”

“I guess I can,” Ichigo said, “What good will that do? We need to get away from him.”

“We’ll stop and I’ll greet them and you act like a cat,” Nabiki said. They stop from and turned to their pursuer. “Why are you following us?” Nabiki asked hoping that Ranma marshal arts tunnel vision would blind him to any clues of who she is.

“I just want to,” Ranma said. Just then Ichigo meowed. Ranma face paled.

“That’s Mew Mew Cat,” Nabiki said. Ichigo blink as Ranma shake. Nabiki drag her away. By the time Ranma recover he lost the Mew Mews.

Nabiki and Ichigo ran back to the café wearing their uniform. Ichigo just started at the café doors where they should be. Just them the doors open up and two small men carrying a larger ladder left the café. They both tip their hats as they past Nabiki and Ichigo. Kasumi also came from it. “There you are the café is repaired by the student of the school of Repair Anything Art,” she said, “Time to get back to work. I’ve already made the replacement for the orders that got dust in them.”


I’m planning to have Nabiki lead a new team of Mew Mews as they fight the new Enemy. I problem is that I can not think of the new Mew Mews. I don’t want it to be the main Ranma girls that include Ranma’s girl form and also Ashley (I have plans for her). I can only think of Laura from Hamtaro.

Also I’m a believer in the balance of power. If there is great power then there also great weakness or problems. This is why Nabiki power is coming out during her normal form, like her tail and ears.

Pairing later and reader choice.

Any help will be great.

Darkman v3 – I hope the note before answer

Sonic 1 – Thanks

Rightius – I tried to keep what you said.

Saico – I tend to write direct because some gets confused.

Joefish2935 – Thank

Tatsu - Thanks

Innortal – Thanks. Ranma spent ten years training and could do nothing against the monster (Jellster).



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