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Drager
Author of 13 Stories

Rated: T - English - Adventure - Nabiki - Reviews: 67 - Updated: 05-29-08 - Published: 07-16-05 - id:2487953

Disclaimer- I do not own Ranma 1/2 or Tokyo Mew Mew (Mew Mew Power)

Nabiki push the door from the kitchen open. She past the tables each with a teens talking. She raise her free hand to stop the tray from trembling. Her teeth scrap his lips as she tries to figure out where the order goes. She reach form the order only to have the tray sway. It only stops with both hands grabbing it. She look at the order of six and then to each table. Unable to guess where the order went she took the six piece order to the only table with people at the table.

She came the table with her workers were. She slid the tray in the center of the table. “That not our order,” Ashley said.

“That ours,” Akane said looking from another table. Nabiki nodded and slowly raise the tray up. “Busy?” Akane asked as Nabiki place the tray on the table.

“Kasumi is making the orders fast then we can get them out,” Nabiki said as she places the dished on to the table, “I need to get back.” ‘I guess these shoes aren’t just for look,’ Nabiki thought. She lowers under a tray and carefully squeezes between by Ichigo and a customer. Kasumi cheerful humming as she stirs a bowl. She smiled as the sweet smile of her work filled her nose. Nabiki blink at the three orders waiting to be served.

“Nabiki,” Her sister said, “What are you waiting for? There are costumers out there waiting for their food.”

Nabiki look at the paper slip on the tray and over the clattering of the glasses he asks, “Where is table six?”

“There a map on the wall there,” Kasumi said. Nabiki scan over the map before leaving.

In the main dinning room, Kuno stood up. He straiten his clothes and he grab his strains of his jell hair and move each piece to its place. Then he grabs a small walking stick. He slowly walks to Ranma’s table. He walks down alleyway by the others each with their mouth closed and eyes open. “Foul evil sorcerer,” he said walk to Ranma. “Only a vile one like you would unleash a monster like that. I will slay you.”

Nabiki came from the kitchen. Over the chiming of the glass on the tray, she heard Kuno babbling. Her eyes drift ahead to the one yelled as he moved his sticks around. The target of the yelling was simply eating. As Nabiki moved to the conflict she as object hook her legs and then two hands added force to her movement. Nabiki rush forward change to a rush downwards.

After Nabiki stop sliding a warm heavy object pin her down. Her lower left leg was covered by stinging pain. They she heard someone yell that the ice queen slip on her own ice and then the room erupts in mocking laughter. The last of her Ice queen persona was lost as with everyone too busy laughing then helping her out. “Get off my sister you pervert,” Akane yelled. The weight was lifts from her and a set of arms then pulls her to her feet.

On her feet, her right knees screech in pain as it folded under her own wait. She leans to her little sister. She look over at Kuno on his back while Ranma was also up. Kasumi walk into the room. “Nabiki what happen? Are you alright?”

“I’m fine,” Nabiki said, “I trip.”

Kasumi’s eyes slowly move around. “Ichigo clean up the mess and I’ll take care of Nabiki,” Kasumi said before she took her little sister. Nabiki took a step. She found herself falling once more but luckily Kasumi was there to stop her. Nabiki press her teeth together as she limp into the room. Water gathers near her eyes as she forces her right knee to bind. In the kitchen, Kasumi lead Nabiki to a large sink uses to clean object other than the dishes and cooking tools. Kasumi help Nabiki into the counter.

Kasumi remove her little sister shoes and socks and then she moves Nabiki’s legs into the sink. First she gave Nabiki’s legs a quick spraying. With the dirt going down the drain, Kasumi look at her little sister’s face. Her lips were frown a little as her eyes just glace at her legs. She moved away to get what she needs.

Nabiki sat there look at her legs. One was red and swelling while the other had a long scrap going down her leg. She moved her right leg to lower the pain. Next she looks at her other leg her frown gotten more visible she release that she could not feel the blood running down or the cool water.

“I’m back,” Kasumi said. She started to clean the long scrap. “It’s been a while since I took care of you like this.” Kasumi said with a smile. “You would always yell at me that you can take care of yourself while Akane would cry to want me to do all the work.” She looks at the Nabiki’s right knee. “This doesn’t look good you may want to go to the doctor.”

“I’m fine,” Nabiki said, “I gave my word I’ll work here…for now.”

Nabiki started to move but Kasumi place a hand on her. “Lets finish cleaning you up. Then you you’ll slow down and don’t hurt yourself more also if the pain get to great just take a rest for a while. But first lets finish cleaning you up.” A little later, Kasumi help Nabiki to the ground. Her left leg was wrap in white band-add was the first to tough the ground. She smiled that her orange knee brace help to reduce the pain. “Remember,” Kasumi said, “Take it easy.”

Nabiki nodded and walk to the trays waiting to be sent out. Nabiki past into the dinning hall. She past a muffle giggles. The pain erupted in her left shin. She limps by another table only to have it happen once more. As the day went on, Nabiki was still hit on her wounds.

Hours later, Nabiki rests in a chair as her right leg stretch out hoping to get away from the pain. Her eyes drifts to Ichigo who was helping the last of the customers at the cash register. Then her head roll to face the ceiling and close her eyes. Her arms hand limply as her eyes closed. The sounds around her dull as she faded into her little world.

She woke by a strong chill on her knee. She opens her eyes and turned to her older sister. “You just rest while we’re start the clean up.” Nabiki nodded. Kasumi walk into the kitchen.

“Some of the customers were rude,” Ichigo said as she pushes the broom over the floor, “I mean first they push you and they keep hitting your hurt knee.”

“I have a position of power at my school so they joy with the roll reverse,” Nabiki said.

“So what do you do?”

“I don’t want to talk about it,” Nabiki said rubbing her knee, “It’s not something to be proud of.”

“So…Do you have any brothers or sisters?” Ichigo asked.

“Two sisters,” Nabiki said, “My older is here working at the cook and our boss. My little sister has an unusual group she spends time with.”

Just then, Kasumi walk into the room. “Nabiki, why don’t you leave for Dr. Tofu’s. Just leave you uniform. I need to clean it.”

Nabiki nodded and walk into the locker room. Soon she was on her way. Not wanting to hurt her knee more she slower moved through the streets. She came to the doctor’s. She found the office empty. Dr, Tofu walk up to him. “Welcome Nabiki,” he said, “So…” He leads Nabiki into the examination room. “So how did this happen?”

“I trip,” Nabiki said, “I did my best to clean it.”

“You did a good job on your knee.” Dr. Tofu said as remover the knee brace. “There not much to be done with them just relaxes for a while and come and see me. And that include training.”

“You know me,” Nabiki said, “I never do any thing like that.”

“I’ve been examined hundreds of martial artists. I’ve seen those starting, those they train one day a week and those who life is the martial arts.”

“There are always the rumors going to other place about a school girl carry a large sum of money,” Nabiki said looking at her fist.

“I guess it never hurt to be prepared. I study them you never know when some will be trained in one and attack some one.” He steps away. “About the scrap. Change those band-aid daily and if anything is strange with them come to me as soon as you can.”

“I’m sure I can handle it,” Nabiki said.

“It isn’t a small cut. I want to make sure your safe.” He started to write down. “Take this home.” He hand her the paper. “This is for medicine. This will help keep you from get sick.”

“I can’t afford it,” Nabiki said.

“Don’t worry,” Tufo said, “It better losing a little extra money than a leg. Beside part of the city taxes help pays.”

“Your done right?” Nabiki asked.

“Sure,” Tufo said, “But I want to do your check-up soon.”

“Can I go?” Nabiki asked.

“Sure,” Tufo said.

Nabiki got up and made her away to the out of the clinic. She made her way home. Gently she unbend her knee. The linger pain got worst when she place all her wait on the weak knee. Her knee felt that it tries to shred itself. It lighten when she remove the wait from that leg. The cycle continues as Nabiki fought the attempts of the pain to conjure tears. Haft way home, Nabiki drop to the ground.

He rest there when the screams came. She pushes off the ground and roll to her feet. She look around to see a stamped of human from a small side street. She limps her way to the street. She slid herself from finger trying to pull her away. Over the heads of the mob was a pelt of gray knotted fur. She slip herself the shadow.

She glace around to find no one. She reaches pull out of the power pendant. “Mewtaphor!” Nabiki yelled. An orange glow surrounds her. Orange ribbons wrap around her forming into her mew mew clothes. She stretches her fox tail. She looks down to see a band-aid and knee brace were gone. With here healed leg, she rushed into center of the chaos.

There stood a large rat. It walk on it hind leg. Its front paws were replaced by three blades forming a single spike. It uses its metal neck to turn its head upwards. As the mighty roar the spikes spin and spread out. Nabiki covered her ears as the screech drill into her ears. Then it low its head to scan Nabiki with a black optics.

The beast hiss as it sent a spike at Nabiki. Nabiki push off the ground as the spike dug into the street. Its lips twist showing the sharp fangs as the large rat slowly pulled out the spike. It turns to Nabiki, its optic glow a blood red. The beast release its angry in a mighty bellow. The smell oozes around her. She drops to her knee searching for a support in the spinning world.

Surrounded by spinning blur, Nabiki watch as the three ghost rats came up to her. There fangs were in full view as if smiling. She wobbles as to ready herself for the fight. She watches the rats slowly come closer. Then watch three shuffles themselves as the raise their right arm. Before her body could respond to the danger, she was slammed. Nabiki gasp as she was smashed into the wall.

Her presses her hand on the wall and force her way up. She look over her Nabiki drop onto the roof. She pushes herself from sitting. She found the world had a little hazed on it. She place foot on the edge of the roof. The Black optics locks onto here. Once again the spikes fan out.

Nabiki push her back just before the beast took her place. Nabiki watch as it came closer to her with the blades spinning between them. She leaps up. “Fire strike,” Nabiki burning fist hit the two metal claws. The blades slow down and then stop. The giant rat screams to the heaves. It steps to Nabiki. It foot dug into the roof.

Just then, a female teen wearing dark blue leap up from the street. As she drifted to the roof, she strikes the back of the beast with a crystal rod. The beast scream as it arch its back. The giant rat turns to face the new comer. Nabiki stare onto the recently born wound. She straightens her right arm as the orange heart bell formed in her hand. Once again she overlaps the jewels and yelled “Ribbon Strawberry…Check!” Her attack dug into the wound.

Through the red dust, Nabiki stare at the new Mew Mew. She wore a dark blue leotard with light blue ribbon came down from her shoulder. She places her dark blue glove on her light blue slash. She wore the same color slipper like shoes. Her dark blue eyes were performing the same role as Nabiki’s. She brushes her dark blue hair from her eyes and said. “So the rumors are true there another like me. I’m glad its not may crazy black rose classmate of mine. A Fox not bad bit a snow owl is better. Well down to business.”

“What Business?” Nabiki asked.

“To see who is better of course,” the mew said. She raises her right hand. Mist started to swirl around her. Slowly the mist gathers. The water droplets slowly change into a rod. She lowers her new weapon facing a blade at Nabiki.

“I’m not going to fight you,” Nabiki said. Here eyes lock on the ice blade before him. The dark blue mew mew moves her hands. A sting cross ran Nabiki’s right cheek. Nabiki tap her cheek and look at the red on her orange glove. “So will you fight now?”

“I won’t fight you but I will defend myself,” Nabiki said.

“What type of freak are you?” the teen asked, “One of the few in these parts that refuse a challenge. Ice Spear.”

Nabiki leap over the teen thrusting her ice spear. Her boots click as they hit the ledge of the building. Nabiki turn to watch the teen recover from her attack. Once again, the Teen ready herself for another attack. Nabiki step back and lose a few strains of ear fur. Haft way down Nabiki push off the wall. Nabiki’s feet planted on a table. The teen look at Nabiki as she releases the ice remains. The spear seep into the hole it made in the ground.

“If you not going to fight hold still,” the teen yelled. She raise her hand into the air. A mist swirl around her hand. Then she low her arm down and grip her new spear.

“No way,” Nabiki said, “I’m not going to let you hurt me.”

Nabiki stood on the table. She ready each over her muscle to move. “I think I hear a fight,” someone yelled, “Lets go find.”

“We’ll call this a draw from now,” the teen said before jumping away.

Nabiki too leap away. Her tail sways as she made her way. She smiled as the wind pet her body. She glided over a gap between two buildings. She frowns when she saw her home. She drops into a hiding place. She felt her clothes change before pain covered her knee.

She limps her way down the street to her home. She ran her palm along her check to remove looking for some blood only to find it clean from of blood and pain. As she came home, she heard a load scream and then many other sounds from battle. “Please be the normal strangeness,” Nabiki mutter under her breath.


Sorry, it has been a busy time in my life. That of anyone has ideals for the local normal problems go ahead and tell me. I enjoy hearing others’ ideals and they help me.

I have a few things that I would like your thoughts on:

Any ideals for the new Mew Mew(s)? Tell her name, what her mew form look like and about herself. As I’ve been saying keep I do not want the main being Mew Mews that include: Ranma’s female form, Akane, Shampoo, Ukyo, and Kodachi.

Any ideal for moments for the story. The mew mews or local problems.

Innortal – I like the ideal for Ranma getting help from Nabiki to track Mew Mew Nabiki. Thanks, I wanted Nabiki two live to conflict with each other like her ears and tail coming out when she has a cunning ideal.

borg rabbit – American English is my only language. There are some writers I have a hard time reading as well.

Darkman v3 – I don’t know what the pairing will be. The read get to vote. I may have a little Mew Mew Nabiki and Ranma or what looks like it to Ranma’s other fiancés. Then they may go on a fox hunt.

Reborn Vampire - I have been trying to take care of the tense. I only have two mew mews for the new team. I do need more. They cal also be OC.

2005 – I mean that I would like to avoid having Ranma’s female form or his fiancés to become mew mews but Kasumi could be one.

Calamite – Thanks.



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