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xSlashable
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Rated: K - English - Poetry - Reviews: 13 - Published: 07-17-05 - id:2488364

I don't actually know why I have written this, I was just listening to the music of Finding Neverland. And this sort of popped in my head.


I have been in the paradise, and I would take you with me. I really wanted to take you with me. You just have to make yourself part of it, part of me. You where, you once where, but everything changed. You didn't belonged in my life anymore. The harder I tried to understand you, the more you faded away. Now your touch is beyond my reach. How did this become? Why did this become? Come with me, come with me to the paradise, the paradise where I have been and you always dreamed of.


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