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GoodMorningBeautiful2005: Wow! I received 8 reviews on one chapter...I finally made it pased 60 reviews...Now to answer the reviews and continue writting the final chapter.
Babycakes3620-Yes, you are the very first reviewer for this chapter...(smiles)..I congratulate you...Well your guess was sortta right...It was for somebody to watch over Jak...Read this chapter and find out.
wierd one 99999-Well it's not me that's in the game...I just made up this character...But thank-you for the compiments..(smiles)..I'd love to read your first story...Send it to me through my e-mail address, it's in my profile. Or send it through my message board..(smiles)..And no there won't be a Muse 3 until next fall when I do the final chapter in the soga...The Finished Story - Bood 3..
SilverEyes18- I'm glad you liked it...I've been trying my best to fulfill my reviewer's wishes..(smiles)...And yes, you've said that before..
Crazed Demon-Jak and Daxter have a great reaction to her new appearance..(smiles devilishly)...Especially Daxter..(wink, wink)...If you know what I mean...I usually only e-mail those who had reviewed me on that chapter. But being this is the final chapter I'm e-mailing everybody.
Moonclaw-Nope, not the right guess...She has short ears, because she returns as a human.
Feeny-That's all right as long as you've reviewed...Nope, Serena doesn't die...yet.
Sleeping Elf -Well, I'm glad you liked the story so far...Keep on reading and reviewing...Nope Serena hasn't died...yet...(smiles)
Up-High- I'm glad you liked the chapter...And nope that's not what she asked for...Keep reading to find out...(smiles)
Jak-X- Thank-you for the wonderful review. I'm glad you think my story is very good. I sometimes have my doubts, but I always look for the rainbow after the rain is gone. Thank-you very much for the inspiration for going on with story. It's reviewer's like you that give me the strength to write my stories, because there's always a critic somewhere out there that would love to destroy a persons good name or reputation. Thank-you again.
As the dust settled, Jak and Daxter looked behind them. There stood the young mysterious, beautiful woman, who was maybe 5ft 7". She wore wastelander clothing, so instantly they thought she was a Wastelander. She also had several guns on her. They were either on her thighs, waist, or her back. She also had two small dagger like swords hooked to her wrists. (Think of Gabriel on Zena, warrior princess)
"Wow, who's the babe?" asked Daxter
"Not sure." Jak replied, "Let's go see.
As they walked up toward her they didn't see Errol slowly stand up from the Eco Freak won't get the best of me. He thought. I will kill him if it's the last thing I do.
"Thanks, but who are you?" Jak asked as he and Daxter walked over to the woman.
She smiled at them and said, "It's only been a month, do you not remember little 'ole me Jak?"
"Hey baby, how can we remember you when we don't even know who the hell you are?" asked Daxter
"You mean to tell me that you don't remember a second, smarter, ottsel with you when you went through the palace ruins to get to the catacombs?" she asked
Both look at her in surprise then at each other, then back at her and said at the same time. "Serena?"
She smiled and asked, "Yes?"
"No way!" Daxter began yelling, "You never told us you were a foxy chick when you before you were turned into an ottsel!"
"You look..." began Jak
"..like a gorgeous babe!" finished Daxter, "You can boss me around as much as you want, now."
Serena shook her head and chuckled, "You sure haven't changed much Dax."
"Nope." he said, "And I don't plan on changing any time soon." They were then interrupted by Errol.
"My,my, looks like the Freak Show is still alive." he said menacingly, "You know beautiful, you shouldn't be here."
"You know what Errol, you're right, I shouldn't, but I am here because my friends are more important than myself." she said, "And you need to shut the fuck up!"
After she said this she threw one of her dagger like swords towards his robotic body. Errol moved to the side, but no in time; she made a direct hit. He looked down at his robotic arm to see that it had been severed off. He then raised his other arm, which turned into a canon, before he began shooting at her, he said, "DIE!" As the battle ragged on Serena and Jak used up almost all of their ammo. Jak took out his peacemaker and set the Supper Nova setting on.
Serena looked at him just before he fired and said, "Not yet!"
"Why?" he asked, "It's all we have."
"Exactly." she said, "We have to make it count." Serena took out her second and last sword.
"What are you doing?" Jak inquired.
"I've gotta disable his canon or at least make it disfunction." she said. She took out a mirror from her back pocket and held it above her head.
"This is no time to do your make-up babe." Daxter said
"I'm trying to see him." she said, "He's to your right Jak and he's turned around at the moment.I'm taking my chance."
"Be careful!" yelled both men.
Serena ran over to another mound of sand and sat there for a moment. After he stopped shooting again she stood up and said, "Hey idiot, looking for me?" Errol turned around and pointed his canon at her and was about to shoot, however she was faster. Every time he shot at her she'd dodged it. She was getting closer to him, she then ran with all of her might and severed his arm off. This arm however wasn't robotic and when she did this Errol screamed in pain. Blood gushed out of the wound and onto Serena's chest. That was when Serena noticed he also had a bomb like gun on his chest. "SHOOT HIM NOW JAK!" she yelled
As Jak lifted his peacemaker and shot him Errol looked up at her and said, "Damn you all to hell." and exploded.
Muse 1: Yes you are.
Muse 2: Please continue!
GoodMorningBeautiful2005: Okay!
Inside the Arena
Jak walked onto the platform in front of Damas's throne, where a man was standing, with his back to Jak. The man then said, "Congratulations Jak, you've saved both Haven and Spargus City. I'm so proud of you, though I'm not surprised. After all, you come from a long line of hero's. You are truly your father's son and you will live up to your name, Jak Mar. as the man turned around Jak couldn't help but gasped. It was Damas, his father. He was alive, his father was alive!
"Father?" Jak asked, "You're ALIVE!"
Damas nodded and walked down to his son and said, "Yes, I am as are you, my son."
"But how?" Jak asked, "I thought..."
"I thought so too, but..."he looked over to Serena, "...let's just say a little orange birdie told me it wasn't my time and it was right."
Suddenly there was a cough, both father and son looked over to see the three ottsel precursors were standing there with their ship, ready to take off. "Yes, Jak you are truly a great hero." began Leader Ottsel, "You have once again saved this world and once again the world is at peace."
"Yeah, but don't get too comfortable dude." said Surfer Ottsel, "Because you have many more adventures in your future dude."
"Or is the in the...umm...past." began Dummy Ottsel.
"Yes, yes, we'll get to that later." said Leader Ottsel, "Now Daxter, for your bravery for facing your fears and helping Jak, we grant you 1 wish. And be wise for what you wish for."
"That's easy!" said Daxter thinking, "You know I could use a pair of pants like yours."
ZAP! He got a pair of bell-bottom blue-jean pants.
Daxter looked up and said, "Wait! I didn't say I wish for them!"
Tess looked at Daxter's pants and said, "Ooo, I wish I had a pair just like those."
"Be careful." said Leader Ottsel.
ZAP! She got a pair of thigh high pants, but in receiving the pants she also was turned into an ottsel. Daxter whistled at her and said, "Don't worry sugar, although, you might wanna start shaving in certain places. Trust me on this."
"As for you, pointing at Jakie, we grant you a wish, and remember to be carful of what you wish for." said Leader Ottsel.
Jakie looked up and said. "Easy as pie. I want to look like myself again, only in an Elf form." The Leader nodded and pointed his staff at her and ZAP! Jakie was lifted into the air, sparkles surrounded her as did an extremely bright light.(Think of Shrek 1 when Princess Fiona was turned in an Oger at the end.) As she landed back onto her feet everybody gasped.
"SHAZAM!" exclaimed Jinx, "Now that's a woman."
Jakie was no longer an ottsel, but a very beautiful Elf. (Think of J-Lo) Serena laughed at Jinx's goofy smile and walked over to her sister and said, "You better look out."
"Why?" she asked
"Because Jinx has his eyes on you now." Serena said with laughter in her voice.
"As for you Serena," began Leader Ottsel, "You came to this world by accident, disrupted it in many times, what was suppose to happen, and have committed crimes in this world, that would be punishable, in your world, by death..." Jak look at Serena with concern in his eyes. Serena swallowed a lump in her throat nervously. "However," he continued, "You also saved the world by helping in killing the Metal Head Leader Kor, saving a city from a tyrant, and killed Errol, by dismembering him. We also grant you a wish. You can either return to your world or you can stay here as a member of this world. Now choose wisely."
Serena thought for a moment. If I return I may never see anybody here again. She then looked at her friends as they waited for her decision. But if I stay I'll never see my family or my Earth friends ever again. She then looked at Jak, who smiled at her. Then again, Jak may need my help on these new adventures of his. Serena smiled.
Torn, Ashelin, and Samos's thought's were the same, She sure is taking this into more consideration that Daxter took his wish.
Serena looked up at the three ottsels. "I wish..." she paused, Jak and Daxter seemed to holding their breath in anticipation, "...to go home, on one condition."
"Which is?" asked Leader Ottsel.
"To be able to come back and see my friends whenever I want to or am needed." She finished smiling.
"I think that can be done."said Leader Ottsel. "Of coarse that would mean Alycia is going to have to stay with you."
"Sounds fun." Serena said smiling.
"You don't know the half of it dudet." said Surfer Ottsel.
"But first we have something to show you Jak." said Leader
"What?" he asked
"The universe!" Leader Ottsel said as they boarded the aircraft. As the ship opened, a beam of light exploded throughout the arena. Everybody looked away from it. When they opened their eyes again, Daxter, Tess, Serena, and Jakie were on the platform all a lone...
Or were they?
Daxter glanced behind them, only to take a double glance and yelled, "JAK!"
Serena and Jakie smiled and asked, "Why are you-"
"Here?" He finished, "You didn't think I'd leave you guys, when we have another adventure coming do you?"
Serena smiled, "Well, Jakie, looks like you're gonna have all the fun without me."
"Yep." she said, "We'll call you if we need your help." she said this part with a wink. After the grand celebration and saying her goodbye's to everybody Serena disappeared into the night. Only with the hope of seeing her friends again in the future. With that all seemed to return to normal...or was it?
I'd like to thank everybody for the reviews. Thanks, without you, this story wouldn't of made it this far...
Muse 2: You think she forgot about us?
Muse 1: You think?
GoodMorningBeautiful2005: Also I'd like to give a special thanks to my Muses(who are real people) You're the best!
Muse 1-2: Don't make us cry...You know we hate endings...(begins crying)
GoodMorningBeautiful2005: Don't worry, we migh have a in between story before we write the final story to Serena's soga...
Muse 1-2: (looks at each other) Aaaahhhh! No more sequels!