|Marmalade Boy: Immoral Love
Author: momiji-k PM
Yuu's discovery about his past has destroyed his relationship with Miki. Being bloodrelated, they have no choice but to break up. What will happen on their farewell trip to make their final sweet memories together? [Some extra insight on Manga vol 8]Rated: Fiction T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 3 - Words: 6,282 - Reviews: 27 - Favs: 14 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 09-16-05 - Published: 09-06-05 - Status: Complete - id: 2569128
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Thank you for reading this fan fic all the way through. A special thanks to clemen for reviewing the story thus far and being the first reviewer. I once again took some of the dialogue from the Tokyo Pop manga when the scene required it. Otherwise I tried to come up with as much new material as possible. I just found that doing this fic required following it to the letter. Some scenes can't be portrayed by just skipping what happened. If I am going to do a scene I want it to be accurate. So please forgive me if you feel there is too much of the actual manga dialogue in this fic. I did my best. Please let me know what you think. Maybe if I get a lot of reviews I will start a new story to continue where this one finished.
Marmalade Boy: Immoral Love
Hand in hand Yuu and Miki came to the kitchen table where their parents were sitting. Serious looks on each of their faces made it almost look like they were attending a funeral. Yuu grabbed the attention of every parent at the table with his serious tone and the words he spoke. "We have something to tell you."
Each parent gazed at the young lovers in bewilderment. Question looks on their respective faces were followed nothing other than questions.
"Something to tell us?" Chiyako spoke in a manner that matched the surprised look on her face.
"What's going on? Holding each others hands!" Jin couldn't hold back his surprise as he stated at his daughter and her step-brother.
"What's going on?" Rumi reiterated the question that had already been asked by her ex-husband.
"Miki and I want to…" Yuu stumbled just a little from his nerves. "…Get married one day."
The words "marriage" and "WHAT?" resounded from all four people as if they were speaking as one being. Shock was written on everyone's face and all but one of them arose from the table at once. Youji remained seated for some reason. No less surprised than the rest of them, he just seemed unable to stand.
From there Yuu and Miki explained how they came to know the truth about their relation and how they have suffered from not knowing until it was too late. All four parents couldn't believe what they were hearing. It was time to set the record straight.
Chiyako lead the story of how they were involved with each other in college and the story of her pregnancy with Jin's baby. It was a painful and personal remembrance for all four involved. It was revealed how a series of misunderstandings led to change all of their lives. But it was a story that had to be told given light to the misunderstandings of their very own children.
Chiyako was to marry Youji and he was going to help her said Jin's baby as his own. It was just like Yuu and Miki had suspected. But along the way she miscarried the baby. Chiyako and Youji got married any ways and together had Yuu. Meanwhile Jin had hooked up with Rumi after she left Youji and they gave birth to Miki.
In a big sigh of relief the truth was finally learned after all this time. Yuu finally had found out who his true father was, the man who had raised him all along.
After the story Yuu and Miki decided amongst themselves that they would never jump to conclusions again or let misunderstandings have the last word. Two lessons were learned that day. One a mistake they had made and one a mistake their parents had made. In the end, everyone was happy now. That was all that really mattered, right? Well, almost everyone was happy. It seems Jin had developed a problem of his own now.
Happy to know that they were free to love each other without guilt or judgement Miki and Yuu engaged in the most loving embrace. It was so touching that it lifted everyone's heart. Well, everyone but Jin that is. While the other three parents looked on with happy wonder Jin was fuming.
"HEY!" He yelled. "Yuu, stay away from my daughter! How dare you….right before my eyes!" He howled at them.
The other parents heckled him and the young lovers just ignored his antics. They were adrift with bliss at that moment and not even the wrath of heaven it's self could have tore them apart.
A few days later Miki shared her letter from Meiko about her wedding to Nachan. She was very happy now, living the life she had always wanted with the man she loved. Miki was happy too. She was happy that things seemed to be working out for everyone, at last.
With the news from Meiko, weddings seemed to be the thing to talk about. Feeling inspired,a plan was hatched. While her parents (all four of them) chattered about going to Hawaii and having a double wedding, Miki went over to sit next to Yuu on the sofa. Miki just couldn't believe it as she listened to them. "Are they going to Hawaii again? Leaving their kids alone?" She had that look on her face, it just said. Honestly, what's wrong with them
"Let them do what ever they want. You can come to my place in Kyoto. We can spend some quality time alone there." Yuu had an honest and happy look on his face as he smiled to Miki. Miki returned his smile and answered him with just one word. "Yuu." Emphasized with a lot of love in it.
Suddenly Jin appeared behind the two with his gloomy "over my dead body" look. And that was just what he said!
"You will both go to Hawaii with us. We'll never leave you alone together! As Jin proclaimed his plan to keep them apart he came behind Yuu with a strangle hold.
"You're crushing me." Was about all Yuu could manage to say. Jin was no one to be triffeled with, he was beginning to think maybe there was a force that could come between them after all.
Chiyako piped in with her two cents just then. Relax a little Jin. They'll be alright."
"I don't trust them!" Jin responded stubbornly.
Miki couldn't help but laugh at her father's over protective side. He had never acted this way before. She could only assume since they all lived together he imagined that gave Yuu an advantage most guys didn't have.
Later that night Miki knocked on Yuu's door. It was that time of night where she would spend as much time with him as she could before her father would come and kick her out. The days were almost up for summer vacation. She hoped that they could spend that quality time Yuu had mentioned earlier, together right now. Although it was frustrating she couldn't be mad at her father. He was only doing his job, right? After all, he had to worry about things like sex before marriage and teenage pregnancy. Miki's realization at that thought made her face scrunch up just as Yuu opened his door.
He greeted her with a laugh. "Wh…at's that ….. face. Ha, ha, ha" That was the funniest one she had made in the longest time he could remember.
"Just thinking of my dad's duty." She huffed as she entered the room and plopped herself down on the edge of the bed.
"Huh?" Yuu looked kind of puzzled, since he really didn't know what she was referring to.
"Although he means well, dad's overprotective nature is wearing thin. At this rate we will never have quality time together again." Miki looked a little more than frustrated.
Yuu approached the bed to sit beside Miki. Before he could the door burst open and Jin couldn't contain he words. "What do you mean by AGAIN!"
"AHH!" Both Yuu and Miki weren't mentally prepared for that one and could only yell in a start.
"Now, now. Come back here and behave, will you?" Chiyako came to the door and grabbed Jin by the ear pulling him down the hall with her.
"But… but.." Jin stammered but just couldn't seem to get a hold of anything. "He's a man, and she's alone with him in his bedroom…. They….they…" He just couldn't seem to get the rest of it to come out.
"Which is why I trust him with her. He IS a man and he WILL take good care of her. He was raised well." Chiyako smiled proudly at the thought of her own son loving and protecting her own step-daughter which she had come to treasure. "It's every mother's dream to have her daughter entrusted to such a man."
Miki and Yuu just stood there in disbelief. Miki's father is horrified and Yuu's mother is delighted. Miki's mom and Yuu's father seemed to be indifferent. Although Miki thought her mom leaned on the side of Chiyako she thought maybe she kept a lid on it for her dad's sake.
Yuu walked over and closed the bedroom door. He just smiled at Miki, unable to really think of anything to say. He could only gaze at her lovely face in admiration and he looked forward to the day when her dad wasn't around to put a lid on their desires.
"Yuu." Miki finally broke their silence. "Can I really come and see you in Kyoto while they go to Hawaii?"
Yuu looked at Miki with a warm smile. He approached the bed and sat next to her putting an arm around her. "Sure." He replied with a twinkle in his eyes. "I will come home on vacation for Christmas and we can go back to Kyoto together right after."
"What if our parents won't let us?" Miki questioned Yuu's master plan.
"Huunn…" Yuu made that cute little noise that only he made when he was thinking. "Well, they will have a hard time stopping us while they are in Hawaii won't they?" With that he winked at her. "Don't worry, it will all work out."
"Yuu, I love you. Very, very much!" Miki locked her loving gaze on the only man that could ever be for her as she wrapped her arms around him,
"I love you too, Miki." Yuu barley had time to reciprocate before their lips met in a passion filled kiss that was a little over due. Thanks to Jin that is. They even had time for a few more, before Miki got kicked out of Yuu's room for the night.
And so this chapter in their history came to a close. A new and brighter future awaited them from this point on. This is, if they could get away from Jin.