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I've made a few changes to this. Big thanks to everyone who was so kind in their reviews and an especially big thanks to Nisha Athalwolf, DarkNightDream and Myst for correcting my horrible Spanish! THANKS!
WoM; I know I said this would be a one-shot, but I couldn't help myself. If it makes up for it, this has become a ficlet of unconnected one-shots centering around the girls of Danny Phantom. I still accept all flames graciously since I know I'll piss someone off somewhere down the line.
Once again I don't own Danny Phantom or it's characters. That said, PLEASE keep an open mind and read on.
"Love is an irresistible desire to be irresistibly desired."
-Robert Lee Frost
Ojos Verde
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I sighed as I looked away from my blank paper and up at the full moon glowing in the sky. So beautiful… so much bigger than it looked… It reminded me of you, actually. Though I doubt I'd ever have the courage to tell you that…
I sighed again at that though, looked back down at my paper, which I was supposed to use to write a poem expressing who I was. It was so stupid, how could a couple of rhymes tell anybody who I am? Nobody understood me. Nobody TRIED to. They all take me at face value.
Lost in thought, I tapped my pencil against my paper, a habit I had had for ages, that'd driven my father crazy when I was still in third grade. What was there to write about? There was nothing I wanted that I didn't already have.
…Well, almost nothing…
Hesitating only for a moment, I brought my pencil back down to my paper.
-Green eyes always haunting me
Shrouded in a mystery
Who are you? Why are you here?
And could you love me too, my dear?-
I blushed a little at that last line. I know it's stupid… but I really do love you. It's not just your courage, or your strength, but the fact that you don't treat me like everyone else does. You're… special. That's the only way anyone could ever describe you.
-Green eyes glowing in the night
Never losing will to fight
You look as lonely as I feel
But I hope we can both heal-
-Green eyes looking for the way
For the words I want to say
So misjudged for being free
But do you want those words from me?-
-Green eyes closed in reflection
What is it that has your attention?
Another girl; kind, pretty and smart?
Someone more worthy of your heart?-
-Green eyes alone in this city wide
Searching for the next place to hide
I want to help you, want to know
What is it that makes those green eyes glow?-
-Green eyes that hold my hearts desire
Hauntingly powerful emerald fire
I crave your smile, need your touch
And feel selfish for wanting so much-
Because you love me?
-Green eyes I have come to love
From Guardian flying by above
For you I will forever stand
For us, I hold you out my hand.-
"Nothing! Just finishing some homework, I'll be done in a second, then I'll go to bed." I answered. Dad smiled back, pride in his eyes.
"That's my girl!" He said encouragingly. "Don't stay up too late, though." He kissed me on the head before turning to leave. Eagerly, I turn back to finish the poem while my current rare streak of creativity lasted.
-Green eyes I hope will someday show
The love with which I overflow
I'm not as perfect as all the others say
But you are, mi amor con ojos verdes.-
"Night, Papa…" I said, and, before closing my window, I willed one last thought to reach you…
'…Good night… Danny Phantom…'
I know the poems terrible. (At least by my standards, but my friends say I'm an over obsessed perfectionist freak when it comes to writing/poetry/artwork. Anything else can rot in Hell for all I care. ) and I made Paulina seem just a tad bit deeper then anyone else finds her. (Gnah! 'Ducks away from angry Paulina-haters') But I wanted to take a new view on her others haven't tried yet.
While she's not even my favorite female character, (Valerie is, then Sam, Jazz, Maddie and Ember) she's smarter then people give her credit for (Or, to level with you, at least she's shrewder, which shows she has some brains,) and as a writer, I strive for originality.
With that in mind, feel free to start reviewing (IE; flaming the Hell outta me.)
PS. …I'll take flames, just please no pointy things or snakes, kay? Those scare me...