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When it all began....
01/6/01 : This chapter is the worst chapter of the whole series, its got the most spelling errors, bad puntuation, and its short with NO Cliffhanger so.....don't be put off.
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---Matt's Point of View ---
As I look out the window of the bus could see the endless line of buildings, there where office buildings, apartments , houses and all those other things like shops, cars, people...alot of people... and...well thats all I can bother picking out right now. I turn and look down at my young brother sitting on my lap and I see that he’s reading, or trying to read some names tagged on this bus, we don’t get much tagging here, this must be one of the cheap-no-security-downtown-slow-all-noise buses. T.K looked up at me and asked “Wha' ya thinkin’?” I wasn’t really thinking about anything, I was lost in my day dreaming world, sometimes I would forget everything I day dreamt about, but that was only when I was in my room staring at the sealing of my bedroom or sitting on the couch watching informershals and boring pointless cartoons.
I didn't really pay much attention to anything around me and as you may have picked up I'm not very social. My brother tried to embarrass me almost purposely by *Trying* no, *hinting* no ,*wanting* no, *telling* Tai, the boy that sat next to us on the bus to be friends with me, he said to Tai, “Tai will you be my brothers friend? Matt dose not have very many, and he -” I stopped him before I could say any more. I just pinched him on the neck warning him to stop. T.K did exaggerate on how many friends I really did have because he said ‘Matt dose not have very many’ but really I didn’t have any at all. I never wanted any and I did not need them now! I had a reputation for being the to-cool-to-care attitude, that was true when it came to society, but when it was my brother T.K I really did deep down care about him, although I didn't want to even admit it to myself, if someone else said that to me by now they would be off to hospital with cuts, bruises, and one, or two very black eyes. I guess other people would just think it was just some silly brotherly annoyance or he's trying to make a fool out of me for whatever reason. That's why I didn't mind as much, and it wasn't as if I wanted any friends anyway, yep, I kept telling that to myself to make sure it sunk in there forever. The bus comes to a stop as we finally arrive at camp. Thank goodness for that! Ten more minuets of the noisy bus and children yelling as if it was a shouting contest, I think I would have thrown up. The bus doors open and I see T.K already taking the honors of waking Tai, just as well I wasn't going to wake him anyway. As far as I was concerned I didn't care if he went with the bus till the end of its routine because I knew he probably didn't care either anyway. Taichi was conveniently blocking our exit and let the mob of excited school kids exited the bus in a wild pushing and shoving frensey. Actually I was glad I was not in that mob because it looked like you where going to get beaten up because of all the kids pushing and shovin’, I'm not surprised they want off the bus because I want off just as much as they did, well I didn't really, to be honest I wanted to drive back home I never wanted to goto camp but my little brother reaaaallllyyy reeeeaaalllly wanted to go to put it in is words, and the only way he was going is if I went. I saw Tai wave to some people that walked passed as he wait patently for everyone to get passed, I guess Tai had some friends already on this trip not that I cared but it meant I didn't have to worry about him being my *friend* anymore he had others to keep him company. Tai moves out of the bus and looks back at me and gives me a smile. I just looked away and followed my brother off the bus. Is it me or is it colder than usual this morning?
Ok that's chapter one finished Monday 23 April 2001 at 9:00 pm. BUT! WHERE IS THE CLIFFHANGER YOU ASK?...well I could not think up anything this early into the story so be THANKFULL! Because next chapter you wont be that lucky! ;-)
I am not a perfect typer and sometimes there are typos in my work so just ignore them
If you come across one.
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