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"I'm not dead yet", I said as I grabbed the gun from Alice's hand. A smile crossed her face as she stared intently at me.
"I could kiss you bitch", Alice smiled.
I was shaken by the train. I glanced up to see what was happening. I was startled to find a giant monster with a huge tongue rip open parts of the train. I started to crawl as fast as I could to save myself from death. Then before I knew it, the last person on my team was taken from me "Caplin", I whispered softly. Taken from me by that stupid God forsaken… beast!
I continued to crawl but I saw a gun and a poll out of the mere corner of my eye. Which one should I take, which one damn it! I then realized that if I was going to take the gun, I would have no aim.
The poll would be better defense for me. So I crawled and when I reached the poll and glanced back at the gun and saw that if I would have taken the gun then I would probably not be here, I would become one of those mindless bastards! Covering every inch of the gun was a blue gel like substance, which is called the Tvirus. I continued to gaze at it while I did my best to keep an eye out for anything that would like to try and hurt me.
Then everything was still, I had fallen into a black darkness. I heard some voices "What about Rain?" I heard another voice say "We have no time!" Then the voices disappeared into the darkness.
I looked up and realized I was alone, alone for the first time in a long time. I used the poll to prop myself up and looked around. I was back at point A. Back at the place it all started, the entrance of the Hive. I looked over at the timer, only 5 seconds left. I saw the red cocktail dress I was now used to seeing Alice wear, slip past the corner. I limped as fast as I could to reach the Hive entrance, 3 seconds left. I got out of that place just as the doors started to close, I glanced back "Good-bye, bitch".
ME: short chapter, I know. just wanna no what u guys think? Please give me backup, I have a good feeling about this story. I know I reused a lot of words and there wasn't much dialog, but I'll put more in next time! Just bear with me. Think of this story as an intro to a long story (as long as everyone thinks I should) PLEASE REVIEW!
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