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DarthAnimus
Author of 73 Stories
Rated: K - English - Poetry/Drama - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 02-27-06 - Published: 12-15-05 - Complete - id:2703521
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Author's Notes: This is actually an answer to a challenge. StunGun Millie gave a challenge in her fic/poem "One in the same". The challenge was a POV fic dealing with Kaito's problem, the problem being the fact that he is getting confused with Kaito and Kid. ...look, just read her poem and you'll understand. I highly recommend it, since it's a wonderful poem. This poem is in Hakuba's POV, by the way.

A Friendly Push

Some call it a friendly push
Some call it a wake up call
You, my friend, need a whack on the head
And I'll be happy to comply

I'm the type which hears and sees
but most of all I learn
I've learned to look beyond
to watch with more than just eyes

You always catch my attention
You have to be analyzed
You cover your mask with another
I have to peel them away

I've learned to see through most of your acts
So why do I bother to go further?
It's your life to life, you can fake if you want
Why do I choose to meddle?

I hate to see people suffer
And you're hurting inside
Only one person is equally hurt:
the one you love the most

Never think of me as the emotional sort
Don't think I actually care
But you don't deserve this, especially not her
And you aren't so bad either

It's day time again and you wear your mask
A mask of bright colors
The colors aren't a good distraction
I still see the grey

In moonlight you should have a rest
But the night has a mask of white
Truly ironic, all colors vanish
But you can't hide the grey

There's been a change to your mask
I think I see a crack
You want to break it, I know that much
But I think you're too afraid

You're so scared, you've always worn a mask
But you also love her
Which is stroger? Fear or love?
Will you do it for her?

I think you're stalling
You wait for her to break through
You really are an idiot
I thought you were smarter than this

This can't go on, I have to stop this
You're hurting her too much as it is
You need a little push, to make you move
You'd never move on your own

At the moment you're shoved forward
I don't think you'll appreciate my help
But when you have her in your arms
I think you will change your mind

I'll remove that mask for you
even if it's the last thing I do
I've had enough of you two suffering
It's time for a friendly push

Ending notes: There you have it! I wrote this for some hours...in school. I can multitask! I'm actually planning on writing an actual fic to go with this. It's probably going to be posted as another chapter to this.

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