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This story started when a family from the nearby village went for a walk near the sea.

As the mother and father hugged each other, enjoying the romance of the sea, palm trees and the setting sun the son became bored and he ran off to the, unknown to his tiny mortal mind, shark infested sea. His mother and father saw this, both of their tiny mortal hearts caught in their throats.

"Wait stop!" the mother cried, running franticly after her son, her eyes widened with fear at what would become of her little boy.

"Keep away from the water!" his father yelled and ran after him, adrenaline surging through his body as he dashed across the sand, the whitish particles flying all over the place as he came to a shuddering halt at the edge of the sea.

Two sharks were darting towards their son in the water and they could not swim out to save him themselves. And so, totally helpless, the mother and father fell to their knees, looking up at the sky.

"Please help our child! We call to the heavens!" they shouted to the sky, hoping that their prayer was heard…

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Yet it was not the Void where this cry was answered, but it was answered by from the Hell Space…

The final punishment for all evil Deities, or whoever else its Guardian, Zerdarakan The God of Torture, decided to imprison there for however long he wished. This was the last place that any prayer should be answered by…

There was a sudden horrific roar that reverberated in Heaven and Hell alike, vibrating the beings that still remained chained in the wretched place.

They have set me free…

Two scarlet eyes opened up, the pupils slitted and glittering silver, the whites no existent. A dark flame could been seen burning in those devils eyes, the very soul of this creature was tainted, its mind twisted into that of a monster. The tail flicked about making a sound like the crack of a whip. The dull edges of the teeth sharpened, glistening pure jet black…

I am finally free… after so long… of being chained… and in agony…

A star the colour of molten copper sped off towards the planet it had been called to, breaking straight through the barrier that had once kept it at bay in its cage, breaking free of Him. A malicious grin spread across its demonically alluring face.

I wonder what they called me for…

The copper star took off toward the planet again and heard the desperate praying of the boy's parents when she entered the atmosphere. They are helpless…

It is so amusing how they cry for my help, maybe I should just let them suffer with the loss of their son…

Nonetheless the star went down to sea level and skimmed over the water, sending a huge spray of water flying behind her, and, soon, they found the boy. Stopping, they plucked the boy out of the water, wrapping their arms around the small mortal and set him down on the beach.

The parents looked up at the copper figure in awe.

"Thank you for saving our son!", the parents said. The boy was merely tapping his foot, looking like he was about to say: I could have done that…

They were surprised when the bright ball of molten copper light that was the beings true form disappeared and a beautiful young woman was hovering in the air. She was dressed in something between black suede and leather.

A sleeveless shirt that hugged the curves of her upper body but exposed her flat abdomen and the small of her back. The black trousers she wore also hugged her long and shapely legs and had a somewhat low waist line.

A belt was about her waist with a sword tied to it encased in an unbreakable jet stone sheath. Her eyes were subtly glowing silver, without pupils or whites, her skin was tanned like a Spanish woman. Her mid-night black hair reached the small of her back. Her eyebrows slender and slightly arched, lips very tempting. Her face was not perfectly round, but leaning slightly to narrow, she was still had striking features nonetheless though.

In short, she looked extremely desirable, and would make any wandering male's mouth water.

"As you say mortal.", the goddess remarked in a frosty voice.

"Your coming was foretold. The prophecy has come true. We can now finish the temple.", the father said, still bowing like his life depended on it, which with this goddess it really did…

"Good."

The father took a few steps in the direction of the village, then stopped and turned toward their new goddess.

"Um...to avoid sounding inconsiderate in front of you, I must ask as to what
your name is?", he said uncertainly.

"I do not have a name...yet. I shall leave that up to you, my followers.", the goddess
replied in a voice that set the father's neck hairs standing on end. She managed to restrain herself from calling them slaves instead of followers.

"Oh...follow us, then, Holy One." He wasn't entirely sure on the phrase 'holy one'.
The family then headed toward their village, with their goddess following them in the air…

To be continued...

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