OK, so a few things. First off: I need your guys's opinions. I've recently realized that I've had this story move much too fast. So I want to re-write the second chapter, and have it go slower from then on. I'll still have the steamy flashback scene, but Will will be a bit more tipsy, and won't remember a lot of it, and he'll blame it on the ale. Plust, there won't be that kiss scenen before Nick shows up. I need to know if this is ok with you guys.

Secondly: I've made a C2 community called "Purely Platonic", and I want to know if any of you want to be on the staff, or if you have any other fics that aren't on there that you think should be. Let me know. You can P.M. me, or E-mail me, or message me on MSN instant messenger at .

After I get like two opinions on this, I'll either start the third chapter, or start revising.