Forever Sixteen

this is just a poem I wrote about Johnny in my science class today.

They called him a hood

Said he was no good

A switchblade and greasy hair

A simple night at the park

And everything went dark

His life got turned all around

The stereotype stayed

Not to be swayed

Until his life literally went up in flames

He saved all those kids

And his life hit the skids

Forever sixteen he'll remain.

so tell me what you thought. Good? Bad? I understand if it sucks...I don't write a lot of poems! Lol.