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Rocku
Author of 17 Stories

Rated: K+ - English - General/Humor - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 07-20-08 - Published: 02-10-06 - id:2793762

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Soooooooo, first Home Movies fiction I’ve written. Any feedback would be great. The introduction is short, but leave a review and tell me if you wanna see more.

SubtrACTION!

Intro

“...so in light of this problem, I’ve come to the conclusion that... Shannon, are you listening?”

“No.”

“Well, this is important, I think you should pay attention...”

“Hn.”

“I’ve come to the conclusion that Brandon tutor you, Shannon, after school.”

“Oh, Jesus...” Brandon put his head in his hands and sighed.

“Ha!” Shannon laughed. “That’s a funny joke Mr. Lynch...”

“Oh it’s no joke, Shannon. Brandon is really going to go to your house everyday after school and...”

“Mr...Mr. Lynch?”

“Yes, Brandon?”

“Um, I don’t know how to put this lightly, but ummm... Shannon is a homicidal maniac.”

“Brandon, are you saying you don’t want to do this?”

“Well I...”

“...because I don’t really think you have a choice.”

“But... but I...”

“Brandon!” Shannon yelled. “Stop being a pansy.”

“Mr. Lynch! Shannon called me a pansy!”

“Frankly Brandon, you are acting a little fruity...”

“Aw man...” Brandon slouched down in his desk and crossed his arms over his chest. How would he ever get through this?



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