Deleted scenes for Past Present and Future.

To begin this deleted scenes section, I'll start with changes from the original copy and the recently updated one. The original chapter three was cut in half and now takes up two chapters, increasing the story's length to twenty eight chapters. It was a basic editing process, that took me at least a total of eight hours. I guess I wrote the story in hurry, because the grammar was ridicules.

Alternate Events...

To be honest, the story I wrote as I saw it with little changes to the original thought. Some things I debated on myself with and in the end something had to win.

1. In the original plan, Charlie lived till the end. Instead of being killed by xana in defence headquarters he escaped with Lili and was one of the lyoko generals. I killed him, because I really couldn't place him anywhere in the war or the resistance without distracting and taking away attention from who I wanted it to shine on.

2. Kat was originally supposed to be the information leak. She was tricked into helping the CEA with the thought they would repair sector six allowing her to go back in time and save her family. When she was next to the scanner, Travis shot her.

3. Travis and Lili didn't have romance seconds from death. They were already together. Since in the original Kat was the leak, Amber's character was never created. So with no Amber Travis needed a love interest, so Lili was the only one left. It's a forbidden love, them being first cousins.

Alternate Ending

1. In the original there wasn't a raid on the base. The information leak was present but the lyoko compound wasn't attacked. The plot was the Travis, Lili, Ben, and Odd jr breaking into a CEA research lab and stealing enough machinery to repair sector six. They do so, and before Odd jr was about to go to the year he was originally going to, Kat is revealed as the leak and shoots Odd jr before he gets in. He went back to the day xana was beaten and erased, and he told them about the fail safe, before the shot from Kat killed him.

Everything went back to normal, Xi was never attacked, and I planned to pick it up in Timeline. Either ending could have been used make Timeline, but I went with the original ending.

Sequel/Prequel

The Future isn't written is the first part of the adventure. Though the stories can probably stand alone, they all puzzle piece themselves into a storyline that is revealed as it goes.

Timeline is the third and final part of the trilogy. It's been out for several months, and compared to the others, isn't doing half bad. My theory is that the reason they don't review so much, is because they're rated M, and things review better at T.

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Not my best story, but review wise it did better than the first but wasn't as praised by my readers.

Recent updates

Non related about the story. As I said was possible in the final chapter for Nightmares of the past, As you wish might become a trilogy. I have confirmed it will be. I have a plot, though I haven't started typing it yet. Keep your eyes open. My working title is Cold Blood.