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Deleted scenes of Lessons of trust was hard to come up with. Took me quite a bit of time to recollect what I was thinking about when I was writing it. So I sat around all day trying to focus on the alternate events I could have thought of writing for the story. Here's what I came up with.
Alternate endings...
1. The entire story was originally much more violent. So of course the ending was much more violent. The first draft Trevor was a full blown bad guy. William and Ulrich do team up in this one but they don't get separated till the end. They fight the guards themselves, picking them off one by one. Till Ulrich is caught at the very end. Trevor plans on killing him in front of Yumi, but William disrupts the execution and Ulrich shoots Trevor. In this version the whole Ulrich's mother thing and the whole past with Trevor thing was never incorporated.
2. Milly at one point was supposed to kill one of the terrorists saving Ulrich in the process. She stabs him in the back while he was about to shoot Ulrich. Then after she stabs him she breaks down into tears and starts shivering in a corner, because she had an emotional breakdown from killing someone. It's revealed at the end that she attended therapy and counseling to make her better, but not exactly over it.
Random notes...
1. This was one of the more weirder stories I've written. Like the fact that my favorite couple possibility in the show die. I've killed them off before but in Future isn't written they come back at the end like everyone else. In this story, they die and are the only members of the group who die.
2. No plans for a sequel or spin off.
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Not my most successful story, but it still turned out better than I thought it would.