After much thought, I have decided to remove everything beyond the prologue for rework and re-edit.

After coming back from my long hiatus, caused by real life, I had to reread what I have written and have grown dissatisfied with what has been done. This, plus several reviews that basically mirrored my own feelings on this, has convinced me that what I have written needs work.

So I have decided to "break out the chainsaw".

Or as another person put it: Edit the Crap outta it.

I "broke out the chainsaw" on the last posted chapter (chapter four) and as the yet to be posted chapters five through seven. These have been met with more positive feedback from my pre-readers and has further convinced me that the right thing to do is to rethink, edit and rewrite.

Thanks everyone who took the time and left a review. They do help.

- Trimatter

Note: I will most likely repost the new, and hopefully improved, version of this as a new story rather than add it onto this. Once that is up, I will delete the rest of this current one.