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dancinglemur
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Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Poetry - Aang & Katara - Reviews: 4 - Published: 05-19-06 - Complete - id:2946802

A/N: Hey peeps. Yesterday, during a break at school, my friend typed this poem up for English. So, being the curious person I am, I read it. AND LOVED IT. It's called 'Betrayal' and is totally awesome. And, it gave me an idea.

Zuko: be scared.

dl: -glare- anyways, so, I changed ONE WORD, (since it didn't fit) and wrote a copy that was slightly different, that is here as well.

Alyssa's original words will be in bold.

My words will be normal

The words of the character will be in italics.

Enjoy!

Betrayal

Those eyes grey and full of confusion and innocence when they first opened

Those blood-thirsty eyes so different from those eyes

Those eye I though I knew

Those eyes I trusted confessed my secrets to… all but one

Those eyes that lied betrayed my trust

Burning holes in me

He walks towards me ignorant of the burning chaos and destruction surrounding us-the chaos he caused

His feet not making a sound probably because of his native element

His face splitting into an evil grinproof of the monster he has become

Those eyes those wide, grey eyes

Killing me from the inside

Aang, what happened to you?

Those eyes big, watering sapphire pools filled with tears and churning emotions

Those big, scared eyes scared of me, of what I have become

Those eyes I thought I loved she left me for him

Those eyes I trusted confessed my love to

Those eyes that lied she left

Pleading with me

She backs away from me tripping over her lover's charred remains

Her blue robes torn in the fight for her lover's life

Her eyes leaking tears tears of pain, sadness and loss

Those eyes those wide, blue eyes

Killing me from the inside

Katara, why?

A/N: you like? I had to change "feet" cuz b4 it was "jeans" and there're no jeans in the Avatar-verse. R&R!

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