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A/N: Hey peeps. Yesterday, during a break at school, my friend typed this poem up for English. So, being the curious person I am, I read it. AND LOVED IT. It's called 'Betrayal' and is totally awesome. And, it gave me an idea.
Zuko: be scared.
dl: -glare- anyways, so, I changed ONE WORD, (since it didn't fit) and wrote a copy that was slightly different, that is here as well.
Alyssa's original words will be in bold.
My words will be normal
The words of the character will be in italics.
Enjoy!
Betrayal
Those eyes grey and full of confusion and innocence when they first opened
Those blood-thirsty eyes so different from those eyes
Those eye I though I knew
Those eyes I trusted confessed my secrets to… all but one
Those eyes that lied betrayed my trust
Burning holes in me
He walks towards me ignorant of the burning chaos and destruction surrounding us-the chaos he caused
His feet not making a sound probably because of his native element
His face splitting into an evil grin –proof of the monster he has become
Those eyes those wide, grey eyes
Killing me from the inside
Aang, what happened to you?
…
Those eyes big, watering sapphire pools filled with tears and churning emotions
Those big, scared eyes scared of me, of what I have become
Those eyes I thought I loved she left me for him
Those eyes I trusted confessed my love to
Those eyes that lied she left
Pleading with me
She backs away from me tripping over her lover's charred remains
Her blue robes torn in the fight for her lover's life
Her eyes leaking tears tears of pain, sadness and loss
Those eyes those wide, blue eyes
Killing me from the inside
Katara, why?
A/N: you like? I had to change "feet" cuz b4 it was "jeans" and there're no jeans in the Avatar-verse. R&R!