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Deadlydoodlebug
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Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Gaara & Hinata H. - Reviews: 24 - Published: 05-29-06 - Complete - id:2963562

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A boy and a girl,

the best of friends

from 8 to 18

from beginning to end.

Through all the years

their friendship grew.

They both felt the same,

but neither knew.

Each wakeing moment

since the day they met.

They both loved each other

sunrise to sun set.

She was all he had

in his terrible life.

She was the one

who kept him from his knife.

She was his angel,

only her made him smile.

Though life threw him curves,

she made it all worth while.

Then one day

things went terribly wrong.

The next few weeks

were like a very said song.

She made him jealous

on purpose she tried.

To test his love,

when the boy with the aquie green eye's

asked "do you love him?"

on purpose the lied.

She played with him

like it was a game.

Little did she know

things would never be the same.

Testing his love

her plan was working

but she had no clue

how wrong things would go,

the damage she would do.

One night he broke down,

feeling very alone.

Just him and his blade

no one else home.

He dialed her number

she answered "Hello?"

he told her he loved her

and hung up the phone.

She raced to his house

just a minute to late.

Found him lying in his blood

his heart had no rate.

Beside him was a note.

In it his confession.

His love for this girl,

his only obsession.

As she read the note,

she knelt down and cried

grabbed his knife,

that night they both died...

They were found in each others arm's,

both of them lay dead.

Under his note

her handwriting read:

"I love him so,

he never knew.

All this time,

I loved him to."

END

sniff sniff, awww such a sad ending. Now I warned you in the summery that this was a tragic and that there WOULD be character's death. So, I had better not be seeing any flames unless they're to comment on my bad grammer. Oh and if I did miss spell some words or something like that do please tell me. Tell we meet agean my beloved readers... Please R/R

OHH, and one more thing,this is for Killerdoodlebug. I DO expect you to read this and tell me whatcha thought about it Luvs Ya sis...

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