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Defiled one
Author of 4 Stories

Rated: M - English - General/Romance - Reviews: 24 - Updated: 07-19-06 - Published: 07-07-06 - Complete - id:3031689

I don’t own Elfen Lied, I am doing this for pleasure, and I don’t profit by writing this. Elfen Lied belongs to Genco and their respective companies


Chapter 10: self righteous suicide

She continued to observe the sun near the window. A gentle breeze picked gently her hair and there she stood, immobilized by the thoughts and misery of her existence. And there was nothing she could do about it.

The end of all hope, the dissipation of an existence, she was brought back to the past to either kill or be killed yet, her other personality was much darker than she thought. Nyu, has she preferred to call it, was the voice inside of the Silpelits, the voice that scrutinizes their mind to kill, to ravish the bodies in blood.

And Nyu was slowly corrupting her mind; her only barrier of protection against her was the collar that would rather kill her, than to let Nyu take control.

Yet, the night was slowly falling and a red moon mixed with a red atmosphere of blood and darkened feelings were the rulers of the night.

The city was deserted; few or none were in Kamakura since the incidents… only SAT teams patrolled the street.

She had to do it…..

At night she went to the storage cabinet, and picked a kinetic suit, the latest model that could be saved from the lab before being taken by Alchemy.

She continued with her silence, her weak and red hair covered her face while she crouched to pick up the suit. The mood was phantasmagoric and so were her chances of surviving...

She was sure that “he” would be there. The so called king…

“What are you doing?”

Nana observed behind the door, confused to see Lucy. She received no response from her; instead Nana continued to see her dressing and picking some boxes.

“I have…I have to go to a walk...”

When Lucy passed towards Nana she felt her arm being grabbed.

The two stood silent until Nana spoke with grieve towards her.

“We are all going to die, aren’t we?”

Lucy continued silent, only lowering her head in shame.

“Answer me! You said you would never lie to us!”

Nana continued to speak with grieve, seeing her hope being shattered. Mayu the people she knew, they were all going to die.

“I thought I could handle this… but I see that I cannot do anything right… they were right… I am pathetic...”

Lucy gave forced a forced smile to her, her words did not showed any sign of security or hope. She was dead from the inside. Kouta was in their hands and she had nothing more to loose... her daughter was dead; she had nothing more to lose, maybe she was a thing that did not know her place in society, maybe she was a mistake after all.

Lucy thoughts we interrupted when Nana gave her a slap, forcing her to wake up.

“You told us that if there was one of us alive, there could still be hope! You said that we would fight! You are Lucy, Papa said you were powerful and were the most powerful person in the world and papa never lied to me!”

Lucy just stared at Nana; her eyes burned with same flames when she was her age, determination, courage, no matter how hard it would be the challenge, no matter the risk, no matter the danger and how things could be so desperate, she would fight.

“That is right; if you are going then we all go” murmured another Silpelit that heard the conversation in the corridor.

“And me also!” shouted a scientist “You proved us that we could live in harmony”

“In this few weeks we have learned much more about Diclonius, then in the laboratory” murmured another scientist.

“Don’t look at me, I just want to, fucking give them my payback…” murmured a soldier before looking at Lucy “I am the only one you will kill you...” he smirked at her.

“Even Bando” Lucy murmured…

“If we are going to end... let us die for a just cause” Lucy murmured to them. In the corridor the various survivors heard her.

“I knew Papa was right…” Nana continued to smile at her.

“Thank you...” was Lucy only response before shouting orders.

“Listen up… the enemy will be all gathered in the city theater… all his defense forces will be there. I don’t know what might expect us there but, prepare for the worse! Those who want to leave then do so, but those you still believe and trust in my words, let us show to them what mere half-breeds can do!”

“We are with you!” murmured one Silpelit.

The place began to flare with light again, soldiers picking weapons Silpelits dressing kinetic suits, scientists carrying explosives.

“This may be the end of us all…” Lucy smiled towards Nana.


In the Kamakura laboratory, where the dead body of Shirakawa stood, drenched in blood stood the 3 alchemists, all Japan Sat team would be there plus the media, to mark the fall of Humanity and establish the new order.

“Lets us have some fun with the half breeds, shall we?”

The colonel continued to look at his subordinates while fixing his hat. This would be the ultimate showdown, to deal once and for all, the impure bloods.

“We shall initiate the release of the Pandora virus, thus eliminating every human on the face of the earth”

The flamer Alchemists continued to observe his gloves and signs to prepare for the battle.

“Yes, and with the king, he will command every Silpelit to do achieve suicide. Thus ending them all”

“And we shall be gods of the new race! No Dikuroniusus, no dark alchemists can stop us now. After all the King is the Queen brother”

The colonel smirked at the brunette Alchemist remark.

“Yes, he is already waiting in the theater….”

“The director got quite lucky when he found the queen mother”

The flamer continued to slide his finger in to the walls making them melt from the heat.

“It’s the final countdown to humanity and to immortality!”


The seven gathered. Discussing the consequences

“The sole purpose of Alchemy comes to this… the purification of the world from humans and half-breeds, the reason of our existence, our purpose.”

“With the humans destroyed the Dikuroniusus genes shall die with them, except for one, the queen.”

“Who would ever though that the queen father would be Kurama?”

“We should already see it coming; after all he is also the father of number 35, the most powerful Silpelit”

“We have nothing to fear….. The king shall subdue her! And force her!”

“And the child of that beautiful union shall the purest of all!” number seven, mesmerized with the thought of having the purity of their blood, achieve another level.

“Long live Alchemy!”

Number one continued to stare… the only one that was against all of this, their blind convictions deceived them in to believe that they were not born from humans.

Dikuroniusus were hunted down by Alchemy to destroy any evidence of the true. But they feared that the humans might breed another Dikuroniusus, with each human generation, the cells would become more concentrated, more powerful and more dangerous, hence the creation of the collar of Lilith. The problem was that the collar was not created but found. The owner and true creator was the original Dikuroniusus, and no one really knew what could happen if it would be returned to its owner.

Could it be that the dark alchemist would finally finish what it wanted to do in the past?


In the great theater, the Alchemists waited impatiently.

The building was surrounded by the missionary’s who stood observing the building, hundred of Soldiers of the Sat team continued to patrol the streets.

“Who goes there?”

One soldier observed an empty street, until he felt his head twist and explode.

“It started” The king murmured before sitting in a chair, inside the theater.

Outside the building, the soldiers began fire towards anything, but someone cut the power supply of the streets making it impossible to see clearly with their vision. They could only now hear screams and…

The missionaries began to move, trying to find their heat signs but they could not find anything, only the sat team.

“The SAT soldiers are expendable… fire at will!” murmured a robotic voice, before getting hit by a grenade in the head, making the machines go blind, forcing the pilot to leave the shell, only the be ripped afterwards to shreds from another Silpelit

The machines began to speed forward in the street, literally destroying the ground from their weight, the two factions continued to speed forward before Bando dropped his cigar in the street making the c4 explosives activate, destroying 4 machines at the same time, letting the Silpelits pass the barriers of the building and enter the front doors. Only to see a different type of machines, they were humans size yet their exoskeleton made them stronger and more dangerous, behind them was the most dangerous of them all, number 35.

The two factions stood still until the two simultaneously gave the order “ATACK!”

Nana never liked to fight, but for Mayu. To at least have a chance to live, she would gladly make that sacrifice.

Machines and Silpelits Jumped in the air only to literally shock their bodies against the machines, some were destroying them, others dying by the hands of the Alchemists machines.

The impact was so strong that the glasses of the windows of the street shattered, making the Silpelits use the shards, to throw at them.

In the heat of the fight Nana tried to give orders to keep going until she saw Mariko, who slashed her vectors towards her.

Outside the street the heavier machines continued to try and destroy the soldiers that were trying to destroy their line of defense, not letting anyone get in.

Equipped with flamethrowers they continued to stop their advances.

“Fuck. You are a bunch of sissies! “Screamed Bando who got out of his hide out

“YOU WANNA LIVE FOREVER? FOLLOW ME!”

He screamed to the other soldiers, who immediately followed him. Bando prepared a plan; the anti rifle that he stole from one of the damaged missionaries was now positioned in to the ground and four men prepared to fire.

“Aim towards the container that supplies the fuel behind them!”

Bando screamed before they fired. Hitting in the container which caused a chain of reactions in the other weapons that were connected to the fuel making it explode, causing the missionaries that were holding the weapons, to melt from the heat or disintegrate. All flamethrowers were destroyed, but the machines kept coming, and both factions did not retrieved.

Inside the building the Silpelits continued to fight against the humanoid like figures that had an enormous strength and speed. They continued to fight, breaking necks of some Silpelits or being ripped apart by them, exposing their circuits and metals pieces to the air.

Nana jumped and launched it self towards Mariko, tackling her, sending them both falling towards the red theater stairs.

“LUCY GO!” Nana screamed before being thrown towards the wall, making it crack from the impact.

Mariko rose to her feet, her body was not atrophied and she burned from anger.

“You are the one that killed Papa!” Mariko launched it self from the ground and tried to rip Nana apart with their vectors, only to see her slide towards the stairs, descending even more while Mariko began to run after her…


Lucy continued to run, shooting everything that was in her sight.

“I am coming. I am coming for you.” she thought to herself, the feeling of the king was growing stronger at every minute until she kicked the massive wooden doors, showing the main hall of the theater, empty from chairs... no place to hide.

“Lucy” murmured a voice.

Near the stage, four figures continued to observe her.

The Alchemists and the one who sat in the chair in the middle was the king. He was pale has milk, his body was slightly muscular and his red eyes, putrid and sinister smile. He breathed the same hair that she was breathing.

Only wearing some black pants, while his upper body was nude, tattooed with various red drawings of Alchemy on the arms and one massive red pentagram on the chest.

His black hair continued to wave calmly until the Alchemists showed behind them two things… Kouta and Yuka in a corner, while in the other corner, her daughter.

The colonel observed besides the king, while the other two were in the far end of the stage observed the hostages prepared to kill them.

“You have two choices… choose them, humans, or your own daughter to live, either choice, you will come with us.”

Murmured the king, Lucy began to run towards the stage, drawing her guns to kill him.

The King made a sign to the colonel. The leader of the Alchemists began to run towards Lucy, receiving all the hits from her bullets, only to grab her head with only one hand and smash it, right in to ground, causing a hole in the floor from the force.

“You see, my vectors were to small to reach anything, yet I have learned to put them inside my body to enhance my strength” murmured coldly the colonel before taking her head out of the ground and thrown her towards the air, making her smash in to the Victorian ceiling of the ample theater making her fell, to the ground.

The King only applauded the colonel exhibition of strength.

“Choose…. My lovely fiancé and sister… in my opinion your daughter worth’s much more, not to mention that she has the same eyes has you…”

The king went to approach the girl in the end of the stage only to receive a shot in to his direction.

Near the ground Lucy arms rose in the air before regaining her balance.

“Don’t touch her... You Damm son of a bitch!” she shouted before spiting some blood out of her mouth.

“You are right, our mother was a bitch… it had to be to give birth to a thing like you….And your father….who ever though it would be Kurama.”

Lucy just smiled.

“I already knew who my father…was.” She murmured before coughing some blood.

“Well this is some interesting news….and still, he lets his best friend fuck you… what a great father, I might say” He murmured coldly to her.

“ We all made mistakes, but it takes some guts to actually do something about them….spoiled brat… by the looks of you, I might say you were the directors son”

“Bingo!” he shouted while pointing his finger in his neck. “What are you going to do about it?”

Lucy just smiled “Kill you... of course” the colonel picked her by the hair and punched his knee towards her stomach, making her vomit even more blood before receiving a kick in her neck sending her in to the ground again.

Kouta continued to watch…it was her, the woman from his memories.

The flamer continued to smile, while Lust observed the fight….

“STOP IT! JUST STOP IT! PLEASE JUST STOP!” Screamed Kouta angered from the sight of violence before receiving a kick on his head by the flamer.

“Shut the Fuck up! Just look at this prick Lust? Lust! LUST, HEY! I AM TALKING TO YOU!”

The brunette woman observed the scene; tears slowly began to fall from her face, why was she crying, why? It hurt. It hurt so much hearing those words. Why?

Flashback entered her mind

“How long will it take, for her to age?

“You are not Kanae... say your name again…”

“It appear that humans really do have diclonius cells... perfect to make dispensable soldiers”

The flamer continued to shout at her until he observed her face, she was different, something was not right and he came to that conclusion to late.

“My name is Kanae… and I remember”

she murmured before slashing her strings towards the king and the flamer Alchemist, while the king grabbed innocently the strings in one hand, not even making an effort at all, not even cuts appeared in his hand, but the Flamer had problems until he saw one of his leg be ripped, making him scream before launching the flames towards Kanae the brunette Alchemist

The Colonel continued to beat Lucy until he turned his back and saw the scene

“What in the name of Alchemy is this?”

He observed, not aware that in a fight we must never turn our back towards the enemy that was all Lucy needed.

Lucy got up all bruised trembling and shoved a grenade in his mouth from behind his back.

In these brief moments, she talked to him…”you may be strong; you may be fast... but never underestimate a mother…”

She kicked him sending him towards the ground before, crouching. The explosion made his mouth completely shatter and destroy his skull, sending his blood and teeth flying everywhere.

Near the stage the king continued to observe her, until he pulled the strings in his hand sending the brunette towards him, only to punch her right in the face sending her backwards a couple of meters, before the alchemist started burning her.

“You bitch you ripped my leg.” he grunted while burning her.

The brunette continued to burn, her skin melting. Yet she continued to stand, the heat was unbearable.

“I will make this slow and painful” he murmured while in the ground.

The woman observed Kouta until she talked to him…

“Please don’t hate me Kouta don’t hate me brother….” She talked to him while trying hard to stand up from the pain of the fire consuming her body.

Kouta just looked until he realized… his only response was to try and get free “KANAE! KANAE!” he screamed trying to get to her. But he could not move, his sister, he did not know why but she was his sister, the voice… the same voice, the same phrase when he was in the train, when that colonel killed his family.

He took a last smile to her before nodding to her, assuring her that he did not hated her, his tears of joy and sorrow were mixed inside of his eyes and more importantly in his heart.

The woman continued to move drunkenly towards the flamer until she hugged him fiercely, making him also burn with her.

“ I am so happy..” she whispered to the flamer alchemist before launching her strings towards them before she gave the final order to squeeze the strings, making them both be ripped in shower of flames and dust.

The king continued to stare, always smiling, before descending the stage and observed Lucy who trembled from the beating, pouring blood from her shoulder.


Nana continued to fight with Mariko, the two deactivated their vectors but still continued to fight, struggling to get free of their grasp until Mariko was on top of her and began to squeeze her neck. Nana gave her a head butt sending her backwards, making her fall towards the café of the theater.

Outside the building Bando continued to shout orders to them to give them hell.

The remaining Silpelits continued to fight the humanoid figures who still continued to resist

But the real battle was about to begin.


“I only need your blood... You know?” he murmured to her “I can clone you. It would be best”

The king continued to walk, until he grabbed her shoulder and pulled her closer to him, trying desperately to kiss her before being spited in his face. Pulling her hair, forcing her to look at him angered he talked

”I will make you watch… while I rape your daughter."

Lucy continued to fire on to his stomach while being grabbed by him but the bullets did not penetrate his body.

Picking her by the air with his vectors he launched her towards the ground several times until her body was immobilized.

“I know what I might do” He murmured before something clinched his back… Lucy daughter kicked him and tried to bit him, until he picked her by one hand and thrown her towards her mother

“How did you got out?” He murmured before seeing that her burnt ropes. Smiling he observed Lucy look at Kouta and Yuka who were tied at a chair.

“Think you have chosen” from his pocked he picked a pistol and pointed at her daughter and fired.

The little girl only reaction was the scream her mother name

Lucy stood in front of her daughter, blood dripped from her chest and her mouth, her eyes were dim and she was already chocking on her own blood.

The king just smirked and laughed “LET THE EXCHANGE BEGIN!” he screamed before various red pentagrams appeared from the ground.

“With her blood, Pandora virus will be complete and now this will be the end of humanity!”

He laughed hysterically before his tattoos became brilliant

“Looks like her daughter will have to be the queen” he murmured sadistically... he had it all planed.

From the theater, clouds were already beginning to spin and give an open view of the sky for the apocalypse.


Were? Lucy thought… the same place she remembered when she died by the first time.

“You have a choice…”

The voice continued to haunt her.

“Everything believed in you… we cannot change the past…But we can change the future…”

“I failed…”

Lucy continued to observe the red liquid covering her, she only had and arm free until someone grabbed her gently.

The bandaged woman observed her “You are Lilith and I am just a mere archive... Do what you were born to do… “Her eyes became serious and cold before all the bandages covered Lucy body and her.


The king continued to observe the patterns of the sky, observing her blood enter the pentagrams.

Yet… in this moment all Silpelits and Diclonius heard voice, a weak voice. The members of the council heard it and became full of anger and hatred.

The collar that once stood quiet begun to change color, the strange liquid showed a small storm inside of it.

The king driven by curiosity approached the dead body until he was millimeters of the collar, observing the color completely turn pitch black.

Before he had time to retrieve he felt a hand grip his neck taking out his air completely, making choke, he used all his strength to release the grip but it did not budged.

For minutes he struggled, until he was forcibly thrown towards the other end of the large theater smashing through a wall, and to fall a massive lamp post fell on top of him.

The dead body soundly rose up, changing the coloration of the pentagrams that were in the room to pitch black, the eyes became red dark and predatory, her long tongue lashed outside her mouth to flavor the taste of blood that hanged in the air.

Her long red air rose up only to see more sparks coming out of the collar…until something got out of her body…and it was dark and clawed and extremely fast… dark vectors…

The king rose up and smiled “Finally you show up, the dark alchemist.” He murmured sadistically before launching it self at her…

Lucy, stood still for a few moments until she sprinted towards the king making the ground tear from the friction of her feet, until both collided grabbed their hands to test their forces.

The ground began to tremble, the ceiling of the theater was completely ripped apart sending debris and dust everywhere. The pentagrams began to rotate uncontrollably changing to red or to dark several times who would be the dominant

The king feeling frustrated, kicked Lucy leg only to see her fall and support her weight in only one hand and kick his chin with both feet, sending towards the air before being grabbed by his vectors making her come along.

Lucy picked him by his foot and thrown him towards the near building making the debris destroy some of the machines that were attacking her soldiers.

The king, infuriated to see his own blood. began to throw millions of massive chunks of cement until Lucy raised her arm and with one slowly movement a gush of wind was sent towards the debris destroying everything that was coming at her and giving a deep slash in to the king spilling his blood, but he still continued to approach her before kicking her stomach, only to see that she did not flinch.. The collar was trembling and sparks of electricity flied everywhere it was like it was going to explode.

She picked him by his hand before breaking it with her grip and thrown him inside the theater again

Te king continued to observe while falling…” You cannot kill me! I am immortal! I am god!” he screamed to her trying to get her attention.

“Even gods can be killed…” she murmured before sending him right towards the center of the pentagram, smashing his body right in to the ground….

Lucy observed him until he rose up all bloodied and angered in the air before grabbing her daughter…” If you break that collar, she will die also from your virus…” he murmured darkly

“I know what that thing is!” He murmured while entering the red circle to complete the pact of the Pandora virus...

Yet, what he did not expect was the little girl reaction….

”Mama…. I know you never loved me... but you were kind to me and were the only one that really cared for us” the girl continued to observe Lucy. The same little girl who all in her life always wanted to make her mother proud, to have her recognition, now looked at the eyes of the dark alchemist who slowly cried, and nothing more could be seen from its expression.

The girl never wanted to be a burden, she wanted to just to have recognition of her mother, that was she only wanted, yet every time her mother looked at her she could feel shame. But Lucy told her the true.

“You made me proud you always did… and I always loved you never once you brought me shame...” Lucy murmured to the little girl before tearing the collar and letting it enter the pentagram towards her daughter.

The king continued to observe his all body imprisoned by the vectors and to be inside the pentagram he couldn’t move.

Strong winds begun to come from the ground, making their hair fly up towards the air like they were being sucked, yet they continued in the ground.

“NO... I WILL NOT LET THE RACE OF PURES ONE FALL”

The little girl clutched the black sphere in her hand…

“The only pure race that exists is from mama, and those are persons...” She murmured before looking at one last time to her mother.

Both continued to look at each other.

The king continued to try and get free but with one avail…

“DON’T DO IT!” he screamed before she smashed the sphere making the entire content spill.

For a few moments time stopped, and something began trigger…all the pentagrams became black purple, all connecting each other to the main one, until the black blood of the first diclonius that stood inside that sphere began to rise in the air like millions if strings until they began to scatter towards the whole sky

The diclonius king observed his body only to see his skin disappearing, showing the muscles and the bones…the wind intensified more until he began to literally vanish, and so has the little diclonius. He tried to struggle hard clutching his head from the anger, always looking at Lucy before his skull was also sucked by the air and the jaw…


Near the council the seven cried in agonies, but number one continued quiet, slowly being dissolved.

“After so many centuries this madness is over… the Silpelits will be able to reproduce and we shall be exterminated, no more the killing voice inside their head”

Was his last thought, number one began to reveal himself, only to show an old man who slowly was being consumed by the sins of his ancestors, for he was also guilty.

Near the prison only a Kakuzawa clothes stood there and nothing more… he paid the price.

The virus continued to spread to the entire world. Every human, inside their DNA had been awakened the genes of the new generations of humans.


Nana observed Mariko and both observed each other. The voice inside their head that made them kill and hurt... it’s was gone.

Mariko cried out to Kurama in Nana chest, but there was no one there.


Lucy observed everything, her daughter sacrifice, an innocent, the only one that was not tainted by the Kakuzawa blood….

” The basic of Dark alchemy…If you want something you have to give something equal to its value”

Entering the pentagram she proceeded in to pay her debt the price to come to the past was with life... until she observed him… the human, Kouta…. she observed him pass the pentagram barrier that supposedly should not let him enter, all bruised and bloodied he continued toward her with no fear.

“Go away! I have to do this... Boy!” she shouted.

“Nyu... I remember you… in the past… In the other past mean, when I first met you in the beach I began to remember little by little... until this day…” he murmured while coughing blood…I wont make the same mistake…!”

Before she had time to throw him, she was hugged fiercely by him... making her initiate the payment.

The pentagram accepted the offer and began to dissolve the two…”

Lucy just made Kouta look at her “I remember when we first met” she murmured sadly yet angered for his irrational action, only to receive his answer

“We went to the zoo…”

“You gave me ice cream…” she continued to talk smiling weakly.

“We played all day in the small river”

The dissipation was now up to their shoulders... until Lucy spoke the last phrase

” I gave you my first kiss.” She murmured before stopping him to talk more with a fragile kiss.

Their hands were intertwined before they let the beautiful white lights dissolve them and let it hung before spreading in to the air reaching in to clouds towards all worlds.

The pentagram began to dissipate. Leaving only Yuka who observed with tears in her eyes the place where they stood.

The first place that day, the sun illuminated from the sky, nothing more stood there.

The machines were completely destroyed while the Silpelits continued to observe, why they did not aged, in fact, their bodies adapted to their true age.

The final gift of Lucy to them, and that was to have a future.


One decade had passed, since then and I have married and lived happily with my loved and intimate friend….Life has I came to perceive is like and open book that has no end… but that is another story to be told in another time in another place.

“Mayu the kids are here” shouted Nana to her.

Mayu closed her laptop and came to greet their Dikuroniusus daughters...

“How was it with aunt Yuka?” she murmured to them

“It was okay” One of the girls murmured.

“You came really fast.” Nana asked to them while preparing the dinner

“Someone picked us up….it were your friends” she continued to observed her mother

“Friends..?” Nana asked

“Yeah, one with a long red hair and one guy with a dark hair... She was very pale and the boy was also... I almost forgot…. they gave me this...”

Nana and Mayu observed a seashell in her daughter hand, very pink and very old... yet both could smile to each other.

“Let’s eat!” murmured one of their daughters.

And so, life completes it self in the great cycle of death and rebirth.

Was Mayu last words before publishing her book, “Memories of a child.”

Ending credits….


Dedicated to all fanfic writer of Elfen lied community and to all the people who live and know how precious life is.


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