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TheGirlWithKaleidoscopeEyes
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Rated: K - English - Poetry - Reviews: 12 - Published: 07-09-06 - Complete - id:3035065
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1Forever Sixteen

Revised

ok so this is the revised edition of my original Forever Sixteen poem..I didn't cahnge much but this rhymes a bit better so...R&R!

They called him a hood,

Said he was no good,

They didn't even know his name.

A simple night in the park,

And everything got dark,

The deed that put his whole life to shame.

The stereotype stayed,

Not to be swayed,

Until his life literally went up in flames.

He saved all those kids,

And his life hit the skids,

Forever sixteen he'll remain.

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