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AuroraExecution
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Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Reviews: 41 - Updated: 11-10-06 - Published: 08-24-06 - Complete - id:3120959

Notes: So, we're finally here! The last poem in the Unspoken set. Thanks so much to my reviewers, Phoenixsun, Ellie, Icys, Cygnus de Hielo, Nao-san, and lonewolfhiei. I love your reviews; they make me smile. You guys are the awesomest! (Yes, I know that's not a real word. Who cares?)

To everyone who has been reading, thank you very much, and please, please comment if you like it, as this is your last chance.

Lastly, this poem is from the POV of the Bronze Saints as they watch Saga, Camus, and Shura fade away near the end of Hades Sanctuary. I loved this scene, and it made me cry. Personally, I kept seeing Hyoga and Camus when I wrote this, but it fits all of them. The quote at the beginning is (hehe) stolen from Yubiwa, the end credits music of Escaflowne: the movie. So, thanks to everybody. See you in my next poetry set!

Hugs and hugs and hugs (got enough hugs?),
AE


Last Goodbye

"As my tears keep overflowing
I can't see your last smile through the blur.
Don't go! Don't go! Stay with me.
Light breaks through the sky."

Dawn comes up reaching to you

to pull you back to the land of the dead

as I hold you in my arms

my heart begs you to stay

Is sacrifice always so hard?

Is this what our lives were meant to be?

I can hear you whispering

but I can no longer reply

Silently the tears warm my face

as you disappear again and you fade away

into an ocean of lights

that fly up higher and higher

Don't leave me here alone

standing in the warmth of the new day

watching as the last point of your light

fades

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