Well, my little story is over!

First of all, I'd like to thank everyone who's been reviewing this story. It means a lot to me and makes me feel great. Thanks. Here's a shoutout to all my regulars:

-mystic-Hoshi

-Jo

-heaven-monument

-Dawn-of-the-phenix

-AuthorLittle

-lupi loop

-Venusgurl5

-DevilKidd

-Half-elf

-areku26

-relyna

You all ROCK!

Stuff I was pleased about in this story include

-the climaxes,

-the detail which I think has improved,

-the adjectives and speaking words

-the metaphors

-the characters of Taki, Tornado and Madam Sarene,

Now I'd like to outline how non-perfect this story is and where I need to improve.

-Planning

-Yunsung's character never properly defined

-Antagonists more defined and more 'fun' than the Protagonists.(IMO)

-Too much fluff and filler (as much as we all love it)

-Flow (nod to heavenmonument)

-sub-plots (Mina's chat, Weakness, beauty of women) never properly defined.

-Tornado was too weak to be a supervillan (she was just TIED UP!)

I could go on but I forget all the other ones. And that makes it look REALLY BAD! But apparently, according to the 96-or-so reviews so far it was a pretty good story. But I couldn't have continued it without my reviewers. Yet again YOU ROCK ALL YOUR SOCKS!

Now, another story, huh? Well, it might be a while before I think up another which has the proper plot and stuff. I have one in planning but I might not be able to think up a good climax- the characters and setting are going well though. If I do try making it you will find it is completely different in every way to this one. It will be set in modern day, but I assure you it won't be one of those “omg its your characters but set up in all kindsa weird modern situations omfg FUNEE!”. Yeah. Anyways, see ya around!