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Author of 21 Stories |
I’ve started to work on the second chapter of LTE when I encountered a dilemma, and I need
your help to decide this.
1) I could start the second chapter with *Six Weeks Ago* and write the story from the beginning
from the third person’s POV, the way I planned in the first place or
2) I could start with *Ten Months Later* and have Ranma and Akane explaining what happened to
the people around them (separately).
Let’s pro and con this:
***Six Weeks Ago--pro: it’d be long; a lot of characterizations so you’ll be able to see the
connection between this story and Takahashi’s Ranma; a lot of the descriptions of the palace
and the ball and...
Con: it’d be long; it’s harder for me to write; it’d take longer and a lot of it would be
irrelevant to main theme of the story.
***Ten Months Later--pro: it’d be shorter and much easier for me to write; there’d be more
feelings, I mean, a LOT more feelings since Ranma and Akane are telling what happened; the
characterizations would be from Ranma and Akane POV, which would be very close to Takahashi’s;
you’ll know what’s going on sooner and you won’t have to read the irrelevant stuff.
Con: it’d be shorter than I had original planned and I think that’s it.
Actually, I have already decided on going with the second choice, it’d be a lot easier for
me and I personally think the story would be better. But email me at
cosmos_sailor_ and write a review and let me know what you think.
THANKS, love, CSMars