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This is my first piece of writing.
I hope the reader is not disapointed.
crosses fingers
I fell
into the
deep red
pool
of
feelings I can’t
fully
understand
I
was
never
like this…
never
bothered
by such
relentless
thoughts of
when I’ll
see
you
next…
and whether it
is not
soon
enough…
the
whispered words
that stay
with me
throughout
the day…
the soft
caress
that I
cannot
forget…
I
wonder
how I
fell so
hard
that I
didn’t
realize
I
was
in
love
until
it was
almost
too
late…
Please review.