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Black Twisted Soul
Author of 27 Stories

Rated: T - English - Adventure/Suspense - Reviews: 54 - Updated: 01-08-09 - Published: 12-08-06 - id:3279766

Father of Mine

-6-

Sorry it took almost a year to update. I've had a lot to deal with, not to mention I could possibly be depressed. I've just been trying to get my life in order. That and I have a confession to make... if you haven't guessed it already, I have more than one account on here. I've been working on those stories too. I go by Black Twisted Soul (BTS), Pawn in the Game of Life, Royal Rebel, and... another name I can't recall. I've been updating some of those stories and I've been focusing on passing all my classes. Last year of high school, I need to graduate in June. More people have been sick, including myself, so theres that issue.

I've also been busy running my site. Its at the top of my profile if you want to visit it. Its on all my accounts actually. It's a place where I posted my original series, Rebel Strike. You can check it out if you want. I'm not going to hold it against you if you don't. Just a heads up that it might take me a while longer to update again. Internet is being a pain in my ass. So bare with me a little while longer.

Now onto the short... very short (probably) chapter. I lost the story again... so this is all off the top of my head.


The sound of Eric's hummer drowned out the Lexus quickly approaching him. The Lexus had its headlights off, blending in perfectly with the background. He didn't notice it until it appeared next to him. There was no one on the road but him and the Lexus. The window of the Lexus rolled down. The barrel of a nine mil was pointed at him. The inside was too dark to see the people inside.

His eyes widened and he slammed on the brakes. The tires squealed and the car swerved. The Lexus raced past him, drifting into the night. He sat there, breathing heavy. A couple minutes went by but the car did not return. He reached into his pocket for his phone. Before he could get it out something slammed into the back of the hummer. Behind him a truck backed up for another ram. The next one jerked the hummer forward.

"What the hell is going on?"

He hit the accelerator when the truck backed up again. Dirt and rocks shot up as he peeled out. The truck was right behind him, tapping the bumper every so often. Suddenly there were lights shinning in his eyes. The Lexus had waited for him and were now blinding him with the high beams. The truck hit him from an angle this time. This caused the truck to spin out of control. Eric found himself driving toward the left now.

He crashed into some body of water. His head slammed into the airbag that had popped out of the wheel. He groaned, water slowly filling up the hummer. Something warm was running down his face into his ear. The cold water stung his legs. A mess of tires screeched on the road.

"You idiot!" someone yelled. They seemed so far away. "You over did it!"

"I panicked!" another person hissed.

"Well get him out before he drowns! Boss'll have a fit if he dies. We're already on his list for bring in damaged merchandise. This is the second time!"

His door opened. The light breeze was enough to make him shiver. Rough hands pulled him out. Eric yelled in pain. His ankle was caught under the steering wheel.

The person pulling him groaned. "He's stuck."

"Then get him... unstuck!"

The man grumbled. He pulled Eric again and received another scream. After some effort, he came free. The water in the car had reached the seats. The hummer was going down fast. Eric felt himself being lifted over something. Possibly a shoulder. The ground spun as he looked at it.

"What... do you... want?" Eric managed to chock out.

"Shut up." the man hissed.

"What's going on?"

"I said shut up!"

"Secure him in the back of the pick up. We'll take car of his car."

Eric found himself thrown onto the bed of a pick up. He groaned, his ankle throbbing. At least the water had numbed it some. His hands were jerked behind his back, rough rope wrapping around them. His ankles soon followed. Not much later he was in an effective hog tie.

"Any word from you and you'll regret it." the man sneered.

Some kind of top was placed on top of the bed. A tarp?

The engine of the truck started. Eric's heart sank. He was being kidnapped and there was nothing he could do.


Again, sorry for the wait. My explanation is above. And sorry that its not the greatest chapter. This is all off the top of my head. Not normally what I do.



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