Boomer of a plan: chapter 2

Gothicjak: Okay second chapter and I have to thank my first reviewer. AJMS!!!! Thank you I felt kinda lonely but now I shall write more. Second chapter is still in Jinx’s mom POV.

There was one thing keeping Jinx from seeing the true beauty that was Odetta and that was her older sister, Tess.

Now Tess was pretty but she wasn’t as smart as Odetta and when I say smart I mean street smart. Tess was a brilliant girl she just didn’t look it.

“To save you from your old ways
you play forgiveness
watch it now ... here he comes!

He doesn't look a thing like Jesus
But he talks like a gentleman
like you imagined when you were young…”

Odetta was awake so that meant she would be over soon. I heard a crash from upstairs then Pam, my second youngest, was yelling something about smoke, Jinx and asking what was for breakfast.

Knock knock knock

I walked for the door but Jinx slid by me and got to the door first. A small bit of Jinx’s hair was on fire but he’s had worse injures before.

“hey.” Came Odetta’s response as she licked her thumb and pointer finger and put out a clump of Jinx’s hair.

“its Saturday and you’re here at our house? Shouldn’t you be going to see the races?” Pam asked as she sauntered out the door.

“No there’s something more interesting here!” Odetta yelled out to her. She was talking about my son but he didn’t had started to explain something new that he had created, as they climbed the stairs together. Then the smell came

“Jinx and Odetta get back down here!!” They knew their fate. Neither of them had showered in two days and it was obvious.

“what we do?” they asked innocently or as innocently as a 18 year old and a 16 year old could.

“Just get your asses down to the public shower.” I bellowed as I held open the door.

(going to Odetta’s POV since no one wants to have Jinx’s mom in a public shower)

I had showered Jinx just spread the smell around. But then again the public showers are a nice way to see Jinx nude but I’d never admit it. As we strolled towards the showers we caught up with some of the other guys that lived around the neighborhood.

We got to the showers and looked at the signs for each section.

First sign: Woman’s shower

Second sign: Men’s shower + Odetta. I shower with The dudes, why? Because I’m pretty much one and none of the guys care.

We stripped and got into the water. Dudes scratching them selfs in places and spitting, I joined in. I’m one of the best spitters in town and everyone knows it. I finished my shower and stepped carefully over anything slippery and looked Jinx over, yeah… he was still hott… Then I noticed he was staring out a window… He was watching my sister.. or at least her shadow taking a shower.

This is what I hate about him hes more interested in a shadow then a fully naked woman standing next to him. I punched him in the stomach lightly , got dressed aand went home.

Gothicjak: TBC, No Flames, R&R