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Author: LaughingPuppeteer
Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Reviews: 146 - Published: 01-21-07 - Updated: 08-11-08 - Complete - id:3354533

HEY! This is the last Chapter! I'm so amazed that i got this far and i can't wait to put up the first part of the Sequel!

I'm debating on two names: Winning Bella Back or The Shine in Her Eye's ( the second one i have to think of better wording) I'd really like it if you guys could tell me which one is better.

Well I hope you guys like the last part :)


Edward's Point of View

"We're home!" Alice yelled as she tore through the front door. Although I sat in my room I could here Rose and Emmett telling each other how much they missed each other. Alice and Japer were doing the same. I started getting up but resisted. If I went downstairs and found out how Bella coped with her new life it was going to hurt me. If Bella feels happy and doesn't mind moving away I'd be hurt and miserable. If Bella felt horrid and depressed I'd be miserable either way. Why could I not win!

I lost track of time envisioning the different scenarios Bella could be in.

"Bella is okay, not as happy but she's doing better than the time Edward left her," I heard Alice say to the family. I know you're listening Edward, so pay attention! She thought.

"Oh, that's wonderful. Alice why did you leave so suddenly?" Esme asked her, I could hear the concern in her voice.

I hope you're listening Edward. You didn't listen before but I hope you're listening now. This is what your stubbornness caused you to miss; Bella could have died and you couldn't have cared less. I hope you know you might have lost her. Alice once again told me through her thoughts. I felt too weak to block her thoughts out, especially when she directed them straight at me.

"I know I left in a rush but I had a vision," Alice told Esme. A vision you didn't even want to hear about, that you yelled at me for wanting to tell you.

"Bella was on a pair of swings and a vampire was with her. My vision went more into the future and they were running, running away from something. The guy was carrying her and she looked frightened," she told Esme, remembering the vision. My breath caught in my throat. She was with another vampire, who was he and what did he want with my Bella?

"They arrived at Bella's new home and I saw them talking in the kitchen. My vision sped up again, she was sitting on her couch. She looked out her window and saw a pair of eyes looking at her. Another creature jumped onto it. They left chasing each other. Esme I was worried about her, I just grabbed Emmett and left. I though Edward would throw a fit when he found out." She continued. What had I done, why was I so stubborn. I know you're listening Edward, I hope you know what you did to her now.

" Alice, he did throw a fit. It took so much of my power to be able to calm him. He was still hostile toward all of us but he wasn't throwing furniture and knocking down trees like he has been." Japer told her calmly. I knew he would do that, I was right about leaving Jasper behind. Content that what she had decided to do was the right thing she kissed Jasper and continued talking to the rest of the family. I felt ashamed about my actions when I found out Alice left. At the moment I felt furious because I had asked her not to look for Bella but I knew that somewhere deep down a sort of calmness now rested in my heart knowing she was fine.

"Oh my, is she okay?" Esme asked her words were muffled since she was dry sobbing. Why didn't Edward go? She asked herself. That broke my heart in pieces. He loves her. Yes I do, if only they knew how much.

"We didn't know when we were leaving, we found out she lives in Fontana. When we got off the plane I had another vision. Esme, I was only thinking of getting to her as quickly as possible. In the vision Bella was standing behind William, who's a vampire. In front of them stood a werewolf," she told them. I heard a sharp intake from everyone listening. I froze. My hands clutched the sides of my black couch, how could I have been so stupid.

"Is she alright Alice?" Carlisle asked. I could only hear silence for a moment. Carlisle was counting the number of patients he had today. I let out a loud sigh in frustration because I couldn't penetrate their minds.

"I want to tell you how why I left and what happened, you guys should know. And I want Edward to hear also," she told the family. He better be listening Emmett thought, the rest of the family thinking around the same lines.

"The werewolf launched toward Bella but William kicked him. The fight looked okay but William was kicked against a tree and it took him a second to get up. The werewolf turned and pounced on Bella," that was all I needed to hear. I rushed downstairs.

"Is she okay!?" I half asked, half yelled at Alice. Jasper growled at me but I didn't care.

"Hello Edward to you to," Alice greeted me. I couldn't stand not knowing so I turned to Emmett. He was too busy with Rosalie.

"At the moment Edward, that's all that I saw. Soon after we found her Emmett and I fought the boy that attacked her, the werewolf," she told me angrily.

"Nathan, I think his name was. It sounds familiar," Emmett spoke up. "That was a bloody good fight. He was at a disadvantage that took some of the fun away but not all. Oh well. He left with his tail between his paws," he chuckled before kissing Rosalie once more.

"Who did you leave her with? Why is this Nathan character attacked her? Explain Alice, you too Emmett. You can kiss Rosalie any other time," I told them angrily. I was impatient; I think I had the right to be impatient.

Alice looked at Emmett and Emmett looked at Alice.

"William took care of her; he's taken care of her since they met. The only reason Nathan is chasing her is because she is close to William. Nathan thinks that Bella is unsafe with William or something like that. We're not sure yet," she told me but kept her mind blocked. I looked from her to Emmett but his mind was blocked too.

"What are you guys not telling me!?" I roared at them. Rosalie and Jasper growled at me.

"I'm sorry mate but you were being stubborn; she made it plenty clear that you didn't look for her. I agree with her. It seems you didn't care from an outsider position. I'm sorry, couldn't do anything to change her mind," he told me apologetically. I looked down at the ground guiltily.

"I'm glad that William guy was with her, he really cares of for her. You should be thankful bro. he took care of her and protected her. She's safe if she's with him," he told me somewhat simply. I looked into his thoughts for a second and I saw all I needed to see. My hands clutched the wooden chair besides me and my eyes turned charcoal black.

"Calm down Edward, it's your fault and no one else's," Alice hissed at me. I looked into her mind and I could see everything clearly. William pushing her while she sat on the swings, him carrying her, protecting her from Nathan. That should have been you Edward.

I suddenly saw William crash through the window all dirty and hurt. Bella ran toward him, scared and worried. Nathan coming in and William sheltering her. If you hadn't been so stubborn you would have been there to protect her.

When Alice first arrived there and how he was cautious of them and finally William and Bella sitting on the couch, he held her lovingly but she hardly noticed. Her face showed she was worried and scared. Still they were close, closer than Bella had been with any friend here in Forks.

"There just friends Edward," Emmett reminded me. My thoughts were clouded. I had lost Bella.

"Why didn't I go after her!!" I growled loudly, my temper rising with each passing moment.

"Edward you can still…" suddenly Alice stopped and Jasper held her limp body. I didn't care, now I needed to know more about what was happening with my angel.

William and Bella were jumping on the bed, Bella was happy and looked radiant. …. Bella falling of the bed, William couldn't pull her back up too late… both on the ground, Bella on top of him. She bit her bottom lip but he put his finger on it telling her to stop, she obeyed… He leaned in and she did also. Their lips touched…. He sat next to her, a pink tear rolling down his cheek… he placing her in bed and kissing her good night.

Suddenly the wooden chair I was holding onto broke in half. It was entirely my fault. I stared blankly toward the window. Alice told them in vampire speed what she had seen. Suddenly I felt a small hand on my shoulder. Esme was at my side, rubbing my back.

"Look for her and win her back. You love her so don't loose her," was all she said. I looked back to see the rest of my family, they all felt horrible about it. There thoughts were sympathetic toward me except for maybe Alice. She cursed me while saying she felt bad. I turned to look at them and calmed down.

"I will get her back," I simply told them. I look toward all of them and in that instant my heart shattered even more. I loved my family as much as I loved Bella herself. How could I have not noticed this hurt them as much as it did me? There was a big hole in my chest, I needed Bella, no matter what I was and I needed her. I love her, she was my angel.

I gazed out of the window and stared at the landscape surrounding our house. Bella always admired it so much. She loved walking around in the garden but hated all the green when she first moved here. I sighed; I needed to win her back. She still loved me and I knew it.

I glanced at my family one more time, what I saw was something I will never forget:

The Pain in Everyone's Eyes

And it was unbearable.


We'll I'd like to thank all the people that reviewed I really appreciate it :) because it's what made me want to keep on writing.

I'd really like to thank Alice In Wonderland because she is the awsomest editor in the whole wide internet world and i just found out she's gonna be my beta for the sequel TOO! Yeah XD She rocks!
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I'd like to say thanks to AmyGirl23, she might not know it but her review really helped this story. So THANKS!

I want to hold a question answer chapter but i'll only do it if theres enough people with questions. I've seen others do this and i wanted to try because i think it's pretty cool . So please send in questions or comments to any of the characters or me! Yeah! I hope this works.

Thank you for sticking with this story and reviewing :) I can't wait to put up the sequel! Yeah!



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