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DramaQueen of the moon
Author of 3 Stories

Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Reviews: 121 - Updated: 05-12-07 - Published: 01-28-07 - Complete - id:3364939

Me: HELLO PEOLPE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I HOPE YOU ENJOY THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm new at this so PLEASE REVIEW WHENYOU FINSIH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Janelle: Like they would read this!!!! This is terriable!!!!!

Me: Watch your mouth!!!!!! That was so rude!!!!

Anna: There they go agian!!!

Ashley: Just ignore them. Anyway: When your finsihed please be kind and review!!!!!!

Me: NOW STORY TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Larkspur was a beautiful planet ruled by a single kingdom. Queens, on this planet, had more power over the kingdom because of the rulers' emotions are connected to the planet.

Queen Mariah ruled by herself because, the Crogs killed her husband. She had twin daughters. There names were Iva and Eva. Iva, the oldest had long black hair. She had a cresent moon on her right cheek and a strip down her left. Eva, the youngest, had short black hair. She a had a star down her right and a strip down her left. They were both two years old (3 1/2 in earth years) and were little trouble makers. Thier mother, Mariah, had long flowing pink hair. She had a giant moon and a little star in the middle on her right cheek and on her left were two strips. The two girls were Mariah's pride and joy. She loved her twins more than her own kingdom. If something were to happen to them she didn't know what she would do.


One day the twins took off into the forest to do a little exploring.

"Iva," started Eva, "We shouldn't be here...Don't you know what this place is????"

"No, and does it really matter??" replied Iva.

"YES, IT DOES!!!!" shouted Eva. "This place is the Forbibben Forest..."

"The what???"

"The Forbibben is where the Dark One was sealed away after he tried to bring about the end to our world. He was sealed away in this very forest because he was immortal. Anyone who steps in this forest will awaken him and become his evil slave..."

"So," started Iva, "Your point is what??? And besides we're in the forest and nothing has happened to us, so stop being such a worry wort!!"

Iva stomped her foot down on the bordey line to the sealed part of the forest to shut her sister up.

"See, Nothing-Huh!?!?!" Iva heard her sister scream amd spun around to see why. Before she had a chance to move something grabbed her and took her away.

"IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" screamed Eva as hard as she could. Her sister was gone.


Eva ran back to the palace covered in tears.

"What's wrong my Little Star????" Questioned the queen as her daughter flew in the throne room.

"Iva...she's...We...I'm...SORRY!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S ALL MY FAULT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Eva cried.

"Calm down...Where's Iva. Please explain to me what's wrong..."

"Iva and I went into the The Forbbien Forest and someone took Iva away!!!!!!! I'm SO SORRY MOMMY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" She collasped in her mother's arms.

Matiah was upset. Iva, her little girl, was lost to her forever...


A year later, Eva was playing outside in the courtyard. She was sitting a sandbox minding her own busicness when she looked up and saw her sister.

"Iva!!!" Eva screamed as she ran toward her sister. But before Eva could hug her, Iva pushed her away.

"Iva," Started Eva, "Iva, what's wrong?????" Just then Iva started turning into a dark angel. Once the transformationwas complete she started attacking everyone and everything in her path. Queen Mariah saw the whole thing. Mariah ran out , grabbed Eva, and dragged her to the nearest portal. Mariah knew better than anyone hat it was pointless in fighting Iva. She was being controled by the Dark One. Since the Dark One was back the only thing Mariah could do was run away with her daughter hoping one day they could return and claim the throne back and thier home again.


Me:Well did you like it????? PLEASE REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

TO THOSE THAT HAVE ALREADY READ THIS CHAPTER BEFORE ANJD ARE READING IT AGAIN, I AM TRUILY SORRY!!!!!!! I WAS GETTING SOME BAD REVIEWS AND I HATED HOW THIS CHAPTER LOOKED BEFORE COMPAIRED TO ALL THE OTHER CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ME SO SORRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



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