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RebelFlame
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Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Drama - Reviews: 74 - Updated: 08-30-07 - Published: 03-09-07 - Complete - id:3431804

Oneki Dadi and her friend Kaiin Ryo-oki were bugging their friend Enkou Hizoko about who she liked on Naruto.

“No.” Hizoko said.

“Please.” Ryo and Dadi whined.

Dadi was the honey brunette, it was tied into a ponytail and she wore glasses. Brown eyes pleaded that her oldest friend would tell her. She was the youngest at thirteen and slightly serious. She enjoyed a little randomness and would crack a joke now and again. She was also the quietest of the girls.

Ryo-oki liked to be called Ryo; she had strawberry blonde hair and light blue eyes. She was the most random of all the them and the second oldest. She hated seriousness and would probably laugh during a funeral. No one could see her without a smile. She was sometimes called “Comic Relief” by Hizoko.

Hizoko was the oldest and very mature. She was also the loudest and most temperamental. She acted serious but sometimes smiled. She had deep brown hair and brown eyes. She was also the tannest of the trio. A gold chain necklace hung from her neck, she never took it off. Sometimes, Ryo would make fun of her seriousness and get chased around by a ticked off girl.

“Just give us a hint.” Ryo said.

Hizoko pondered this, “Okay, he from the Konoha village.”

“That doesn’t help.” Dadi whined.

“Okay, he has dark colored hair.”

“Come on.”

“Last hint, he is currently wearing the forehead protector.”

Dadi and Ryo thought about it and finally gave up. Hizoko turned on the TV and found Naruto on. It distracted them until it was over.

“So, who do you like?” Ryo asked.

Hizoko sighed and Dadi giggled.

“Ooh! I got an idea!” Dadi shouted, spring from her seat.

“Well, let’s hear it.” Hizoko and Ryou said.

“Let’s make identification cards like on Naruto!” she exclaimed happily

Ryo smiled, “Let’s do it!”

“Oh please, that’s such a stupid idea.” Hizoko said.

“Come on, just for fun.” Dadi said giving the puppy-dog eyes.

Hizoko covered her eyes and clamped her eyelids shut. Unfortunately, she had already seen it.

“Alright fine!” she said, the other girls smiled happily, “But can we have demons?”

“Sure!” the other shouted.

The pasted their pictures on sheets of paper and wrote their names. Then they put the stat sections.

“Okay, everyone grab a paper.” Ryo said holding out a hat with three slips of paper on it.

Hizoko was first and grabbed power. Dadi got intelligence and Ryo got weaponry. After putting now their stats, Hizoko got on the computer and pulled up “Japanese demons”. They decided to go with goddesses. Ryo decided to go with Amaterasu. Dadi picked Benzaiten and Hizoko picked Izanami. After putting down their personalities and other information, they consecrated it in their own weird way.

“Transportation Technique: Konoha!” they shouted and made a few hand signs.

They tapped the cards and turned them a full 360 degrees. A white light started to glow from the center.

“Oh God!” Hizoko shouted.

“What’s happening?” Dadi asked, fear catching her voice.

“I dunno!” Ryo yelled.

All three girls were pulled screaming into the portal. When they landed it was the day and they were in a forest. They looked around.

“Guys.” Dadi said.

“Yeah?” Ryo and Hizoko said.

“I don’t think we’re in Kansas anymore.”

A sign up ahead said “Welcome to Konoha Village!” A leaf symbol was carved under the sign. They were definitely not in Kansas anymore.


If you say Enkou Hizoko it means Rebel Flame. Amaterasu is the sun goddess, Benzaiten is the love goddess, and Izanami is the wind goddess. I couldn’t find any Japanese demons I liked. Oneki is actually Grace which is a friend’s name three guesses who. Please R&R guys! Peace!


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